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Kevin
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0 posted 2000-09-21 01:23 AM


I wish that you could read my mind
And know my love is true
For lately I have come to find
I only think of you
And maybe you can’t be with me
To put my mind at ease
But you still left your memory
To bring me to my knees
I know you always meant to keep
My heart beside your own
But as I rest my eyes to sleep
I know my hearts alone
I wish that I could read your mind
And know you think of me
But still I fear that I would find
That your heart has gone free
Just know my thoughts will always be
With you and what we’ve been
With hopes that you still think of me
The way that you did then


© Copyright 2000 Kevin Bednarz - All Rights Reserved
Tennessee Angel
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1 posted 2000-09-21 01:26 AM


Oh, this is so sad!  Beautiful writing!  

--You can either take me as I am...or you can watch me as I go.--

BirdeeB
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2 posted 2000-09-21 01:59 AM


That was amazing..from the heart..Bravo
Birdeeb

Michat
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3 posted 2000-09-21 02:48 AM


Such tenderness in this lovely poem


JamesMichael
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4 posted 2000-09-21 06:25 AM


Beautiful desires and I hope your heart will not be alone for long...James
Dee
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5 posted 2000-09-21 06:35 AM


Such wise and sonderful words from one so young (if your photos current) Lovely.
Dee

Kevin
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6 posted 2000-09-21 03:05 PM


thank you angel, i always write sad though, makes me feel better

BirdeeB, appreciate it, its always from the heart =)

thank you mich

thanks james, i hope all is going well at your end too

yup dee, thats me =) well 2 years ago, im 18 now, freshman at clemson =)
sliding bye at the moment, i should be paying more attention to studying then my writing oh well


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