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Open Poetry #9

Cruel Insanity

BirdeeB
Member

since 2000-09-16

Posts 106
USA

0 posted 2000-09-20 03:58 AM

Slowly passing with each breath I
Take another life
From behind my eyes
I see the future.
So you think..
I look into your eyes
with the deceat of
the previous of life
held by my own
disappointment.
So you judge
me..
so you take me in
your eyes,
the soul sees the
truth, the trust.
Turn me away
I dare you.
Yeah I see you
over there whispering.
Oblivious to the time
ticking away at my
empty heart.
Pulling away from
the insanity of it all.
Putrid hell.
I smell the burning
ignition of love.
Take away the
the cruel
obscene
reality we all
call life.
Virtues thrown away to
the wind of the ludicrousness
seasons.
Yeah I see you..

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

1 posted 2000-09-20 04:03 AM

YYYYEEEEEEoooouuuucccchhh.....where did this come from.....someone has hurt our little Birdee and they are not going to get away with it me thinks. This is one powerful message you send and it is sent with a force that refuses to be ignored. Great penning!!!!

Dee
Member Elite

since 2000-08-19

Posts 2330
Queensland, Australia

2 posted 2000-09-20 04:53 AM

Birdee, WOW! This hits very hard. I'm glad I'm not on the receiving end.
Dee

BirdeeB
Member

since 2000-09-16

Posts 106
USA

3 posted 2000-09-20 01:19 PM

Thanks you 2. I apperciate it, Yeah I've been hurt, many times by friends. I have over come that..
Thanks again
BirdeeB

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

4 posted 2000-09-20 01:29 PM

Wow! Powerful sentiments Birdee ... really well done!

Best wishes,
/Kit

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