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Temptress
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Mobile, AL

0 posted 2000-09-20 12:56 PM


Entrapped in Autumn's sweet vibrations,
Twirling
Swirling
Leaves are dancing.
Deftly passing
Through the chords of the wind.
Feels like perfect weather again.
Brave heart climbs a tree,
And dangles from swaying limb.
Fever of the season?



Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau"


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Mark Bohannan
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since 2000-06-21
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In the winds of Cherokee song
1 posted 2000-09-20 01:09 AM


OOOOHhhhh  yeahhhh I got the fever for sure and I love this time of year.  Beautiful verse NOW will you come to TX and make the leaves turn already.....we are behind the rest of the country.LOL
Temptress
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2 posted 2000-09-20 01:41 AM


Thanks, Mark.   I'm glad you enjoyed this, and the fever must be contagious.
As for the leaves, they started turning and dying here during the summer because of the serious lack of rain here. The coming Autumn wind is taking care of the rest.

grandiloquent
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since 1999-07-08
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Midwest America
3 posted 2000-09-20 02:46 AM


I write so many poems/verses/stories in Fall, sometimes simply to insert descriptions of the weather. Obviously (or deceptively) Autumn is also you favorite season. I love this line:
Brave heart climbs a tree,
And dangles from swaying limb.

Temptress, thank you for this submission!



Nan
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Cape Cod Massachusetts USA
4 posted 2000-09-20 07:32 AM


Gotta love fall..... hm... you southern folk get to enjoy the fun, too, eh???


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