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Corinne
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0 posted 2000-09-19 03:11 PM


Tu puedes llover
Tu puedes llover
en este lugar
Tu puedes llover
en mi cuerpo
usted puedes llover
dentro de mí.

Translation -

You can rain
inside this room
you can rain
upon my body
you can rain
inside of me.


(c) 2000 Corinne Bailey



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Sunshine
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1 posted 2000-09-19 03:44 PM


must have missed it the first time around, Corinne...but not the second...

great job - thanks for the repost!

Wilfred Yeats
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2 posted 2000-09-19 04:58 PM


Oh yes - this is uh-huh -umm - ahhh WOW!
"Yo estoy obsesionado contigo
Y el mundo es testigo
De mi frenisi" (I like the latin languages too ~G~)
Wonderful Corinne

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3 posted 2000-09-19 05:42 PM



Yo quiero llover
Yo quiero llover
You quiero llover
Como loco.
Te doy lluvia y mas
y amor, pues, quizas
Mi passion por tu piel
No es poco!

Yo quiero llover
Un tormenta sin fin
La tempesta te da poco paz
Te doy muchos carinos
y, tal vez, unos ninos
Aqui vengo! No te ahogas!!!

Parker
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4 posted 2000-09-19 06:36 PM


I love a warm rain, like this everytime I read it....    

Parker

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2000-09-19 06:46 PM


Corrine this is lovely...reminds me of a prayer I memorized in Spanish...which was amazing for me because I don't speak very much...it goes like this..
Senor Jesucristo,
Ven a mi corazon
quita todos mis pecados
lavame en tu sangre
escriba mi nombre en el libro de la vida
deme el bautismo del Espiritu Santo
en el nombre de Jesucristo,  Amen

James

Corinne
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6 posted 2000-09-19 10:11 PM


Muchas gracias, Sunshine!

Ahhh, Ahh, Wilfred! No como obsesionado como estoy con usted, amante! Gracias, Senior!

Balladeer, Impresionan tan me ese usted puedo escribir y ryhme en español! Cómo completamente es romántico!

Parker, lLa lluvia es mojada, la lluvia es caliente especialmente adentro de esta tormenta que rabia!


Un rezo encantador, brillando con verdad, gracias, James!

Corinna  

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7 posted 2000-09-19 10:20 PM


Wilfred es tu amante? Me muero!! mi mundo acabo de terminar! Todas mis esperanzas y suenos han sido botados como basura! Voy a tomar una bottela de etiquetta negra! AYYY, como me duele!!!!!!!!

uh....can we still be friends???

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8 posted 2000-09-20 07:30 AM


Corinne~
Okay all you show offs !
Read this with a Southern drawl .....
Es muy caliente !
Or ... This is HOT !
~*Marge*~



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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