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Falling Apart
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Falling Apart |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Falling Apart Words run sing-song in my heart tripping over each other, laughing at falling apart running, dashing through these memories laughing and cavorting and making sport of me sometimes little words, over and over again like “I love you”, “I adore you” and then briefly steps in some misery of old “I told you so” steps forth bold and then words run sing-song in my heart tripping and laughing at falling apart. 19 September, 2000 ©Karilea Rilling Jungel |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Today I am of very few words....but I really liked this Sunshine. Take Care, Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
This is great Karilea, love the "tripping and laughing at falling apart"...I need to remember that line. Bonnie |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Riddle me this!!!!!! When do words fall so far apart that the place they land is the same place they start? wonderful verse my friend.  |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Sunshine, this is a wonderful style you have woven here...look at some of the poems you wrote a year ago and marvel at how much you have grown! You are great!!! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
JB, take care now, y'hear?... Bonnie, I share well...remember these words for a lifetime... Mark, puzzling, isn't it... 'Deer, you keep talking like that and I'm going to have to shine all over you...{~,^} that is probably the BEST compliment ever... so I will keep it close! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Enjoyed much!!!!!!!! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Wonderful my friend. . . absolutely wonderful. . . Your writing just gets more and more amazing every day!! ---------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Vandana, thank you for keeping an eye out for my pieces...that in itself is a wonderful compliment... Sven, why you...thanks! Perhaps someday I'll have a brick of fame in my own back yard! LOL! Appreciate your peeking in... |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh, I enjoyed this Sunshine ... these words flowed so smoothly along, almost melodic, loved this! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Sunshine, this is a real gem, very well penned. It's so perfect, I love this.  |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Sunshine, this is lovely. I enjoyed it. Dee |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Sunshine, What a fun and lovely poem!! Nice writing!! Lone Wolf Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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