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All the Same to Me
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All the Same to Me |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
One...two...three... I watch them as they fall. Four...five...six... I count them one and all. Seven...eight...nine... I listen to their beat. Ten...eleven...twelve... They fall about my feet. Fifteen, twenty, thirty... Faster they come down. Fourty, fifty, sixty... I fear that I may drown. Eighty, ninety, a hundred... What a sight to see. Rain drops or tear drops... They're all the same to me. --You can either take me as I am...or you can watch me as I go.-- |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
I really liked this such imagination here, It's magic how tears or rain seem to refresh us. |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
TA* The same cleansing comes with both...refreshing to start anew...great writing my friend. |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Another wonderful peice, Tennessee Angel. Dee |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
Rosebud -- Thanks for the response.  Butterflies -- Not one of my better pieces...kind of shallow, but fun to write anyway. I can always count on you for a wonderful response. Thanks! Dee -- Thank you ever so much!! --You can either take me as I am...or you can watch me as I go.-- |
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