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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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He asked himself, "Why do I love her?" "What things to my life does she bring?" So he took a moment to answer that question And this is the song he began to sing I love her for her mind The way that it works so uniquely I love her for her voice The way that it says, "I love you" so sweetly I love her for her beauty The way that it shines like the sun I love her for her laugh The way that she and I can have fun I love her for her tears The way that she can share her feelings I love her for her stories The way that she shares much in the revealing I love her for her smile The way that it lights up a room I love her for her spirit Shining brighter than the brightest moon He went on and on, till the end of time Telling of the things that filled his heart Of the things he loved about her so sublime And when he was finished, he went back to the start -------------------------------------------------------------- < !signature--> That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl [This message has been edited by Sven (edited 09-19-2000).] |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
Oh my...absolutely beautiful. This just oozes sweetness, Sven. I love it!!  |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Beautiful Sven, especially when those words are said to someone special. |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
awesome Sven, there's so much romance in this. Through it all, that's what it's all about, this is true love. |
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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
Oh Such a Lucky Lady... very well done Sven. If with pen in hand I've made you think I've not wasted one drop of ink Vlh. visit my site~ http://www.hsanet.net/user/dkm/hellomy.htm |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah Sven, this pleases me much...hope it will please her as well... and always, always go back to the start, where the romance first began! |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
a beautiful post sven..... to be so adored lucky!! GE |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Romantic perfection Sven! Your sentiments flow so sweetly ... what a romantic heart you have! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Sir Sven of Romance has returned!! LOL  As always Sven, your romantic side is at it's finest here. Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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jlocke Member
since 2000-09-10
Posts 169CC,TX |
You truly have a most beautiful soul. Your works never fails to move me. Please check your e-mail. Love is the law, love under will. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Had to take a second re-read in order to place this in my library...see, came back to the start of it all... |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Oh Sven my eyes filled with tears as I read this. So beautiful and so full of love. I bet she loves you for all those reasons also and more. And I'm sure she is well pleased. Juls |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
This was so very tender and sweet. I am so glad you have this kind of love to write about.....you are a romantic indeed.. Jenn E |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Wow. . . you go away for a while. . . lol Thanks to all of you for your wonderful replies. . . I can only be amazed at how my words speak to all of you. . . Please know that this is just the Romantic in me. . . it's not for anyone in particular. . . thanks again. . . ------------------------------------------------------< !signature--> That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl [This message has been edited by Sven (edited 09-19-2000).] |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
God how beautiful after the day I have had yesterday it is too much. I bow to the master... Isis *Friendship is a horizon - which expands whenever we approach it...* ~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~ |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Sven, Awwwww.. how completely sweet this is! It made me smile You have such a romantic heart. rp25 |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful, Sven! Denise |
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Trew Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Ottawa, Canada |
What more to say, Sir Sven? What a perfect way to describe the reasons for being in love with any fine person. I enjoyed it as much the second time around! Trev. |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
He loved her for all the best reasons, my friend. This is so nice... ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Sven, this is lovely. Especially the ending. Dee |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Again. . . I just want to thank you all. . . Isis, please don't bow to me my friend. . . I am hardly the master! Thank you. . .rp25, thank you. . . glad that you enjoyed! Denise, thank you! Trew, thank you. . . I hope that everyone can see a little about the one that they love in this one. . . Claire, he did. . .and I hope that everyone will. . . thank you my friend. . . Dee, thank you. . . just another spin around the park! ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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