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One Bright Lonely Star
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One Bright Lonely Star |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! 
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**Co-written by Paula Finn** With a kiss to say good morning And your arms to hold me tight It reaffirms the dream I've had All this lonely night We face a new day together Our love, fresh as the morning sun From the moment I looked in your eyes I knew you were the one The one that restored my faith in love And brought me out of the dark The light that lead me to the shore When the future looked so stark The symbol that reflects our love Still shines brightly in the sky For every heart that's ever wished I tell this tale tonight If ever you should look upon That one bright lonely star Know your love is wishing too Though they be near or far It only takes a moment To make that wish come true That star was always shining there To lead my heart to you [This message has been edited by Jeffrey Carter (edited 09-18-2000).] |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
You guys make a great writing team! I love how easily you guys flow together. Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"Know your Love is wishing too though they be near or far." I have always believed those words and I am thinking perhaps the woman I am with now shares the same wishes and desires..James |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Oh, you two.....this is so special!! What a wonderful piece of poetry you have penned together. It's like a diamond in a black velvet sky......it sparkles!!! Very beautiful......... Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Thank you my friend for being my partner...we done GOOD lol |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
ty all for the kind words....i think this may be one of the last pieces that i post for a while.....just not as "driven" to write as i used to be....ty all again |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
It only takes a moment To make that wish come true That star was always shining there To lead my heart to you loved this verse, Jeffrey and Paula...seems everyone needs a break every now and then..I hope you become inspired again to share your thoughts with all, Jeffrey ~~soft smiles Maureen |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
way to go, Jeffrey, this is so romantic. Kathleen |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
heavenly!! there's no other word to say |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
This was like taking a breath of fresh air........what a great read. Jeffrey, I am sad to see that you won't be posting for a while but in the same breath I understand. You two are well paired and the flow of this was great........fellings we all should experience. Take Care. Warm Smiles Jenn E |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Yup, we need a duet's forum, for sure. Good stuff here... |
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