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Kevin
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0 posted 2000-09-18 01:54 AM


I am just a page in your life
But you wrote a book in mine
So many chapters that I reread
While I pretend that I’m fine
And I flip on through the pages
Struggling just to sleep at night
Hoping when I finish reading
That your words will come out right

I have done my share of writing
But my words you tossed away
Passed them off as rights of passage
And just went on with your day
But I hope you somehow find them
Even though they’re out of sight
For if you just stopped to read them
I am sure they’d come out right.



[This message has been edited by Kevin (edited 09-18-2000).]

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Dee
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1 posted 2000-09-18 02:07 AM


Thank you Kevin, this is just what I needed today.
Dee

Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2000-09-18 06:48 AM


Kevin~
Good morning, cutie pie!

Love it when you write - PERIOD !
Love it when you share with us !

How are things at the big C ?
You take care and let us hear from you more often.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com



JamesMichael
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3 posted 2000-09-18 09:04 AM


Yes very nice writing...time will tell...and sometimes we need to adjust our expectations...and I hope that this is not the time for you...I have high expectations in a relationship that is just beginning and I hope me and her share the same desires...James
Marina
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4 posted 2000-09-18 12:48 PM


Great writing Kevin.  You know I always enjoy reading your poetry.

Marina


It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen
Marina Crossley



Kevin
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5 posted 2000-09-18 05:09 PM


Dee, glad to be of service  

MARGE, whats happening   i wish i had time to stop by more but i rarely have time to call home and the parents complain more than anybody else in that department =) clemson is awesome, best time of my life, but i was told it would be that way for a long time now hehe.

CLEMSON FOOTBALL 3-0 and coming after ya!!!
you know who you are

Love hearing from ya back mar, cya when i cya

Kevin
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6 posted 2000-09-18 05:09 PM


Dee, glad to be of service  

MARGE, whats happening   i wish i had time to stop by more but i rarely have time to call home and the parents complain more than anybody else in that department =) clemson is awesome, best time of my life, but i was told it would be that way for a long time now hehe.

CLEMSON FOOTBALL 3-0 and coming after ya!!!
you know who you are

Love hearing from ya back mar, cya when i cya

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