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The Lonely Angel
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The Lonely Angel |
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BirdeeB Member
since 2000-09-16
Posts 106USA |
The Lonely Angel stands upon her moutain she looks to her sunset Is this my life? she asks The lonely angel stands She is tormented. She looks up to the sky to find her way home back to the ones she has left. The Lonely Angel stands she has no where to turn Her malice has put her in a tailspin The lonely angel stands she crys out A lonely tear falls off her lash. She wistfully wipes it away. The lonely Angel stands. as the tear falls to the ground, it shatters like diamonds. The lonely Angel looks in to each shattered drop and finds her way home. The Lonely Angel Stands. |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
I loved it! Maybe this is far-fetched, and, perhaps, totally not what you intended to say, but I thank you for reminding me that, no matter what horrible things people might say or do, you should not stop helping or caring for those who deserve it. Wonderfully written!! Thank you for the great read!!  sp |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
Though you may not not it lonely angel look around and there are alot more lonely angels with you, be not alone for the angels sing a new song just for you. |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Thank you for the encouragement!! That was very sweet!!  sp |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
If we all look in our hearts we can always find our way home again. Thank-you for sharing. |
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