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Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

0 posted 2000-09-17 03:03 PM

~MOONBEAM ROMANCE HAIKU~

5-7-5

Smiling moonbeams glow
ablaze with luminous light
romancing the night

*By Melissa Honeybee*

The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams

Mark Bohannan
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since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

1 posted 2000-09-17 03:07 PM

Romance in the air
as luna's glow lifts you up
kissing stars you are

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

2 posted 2000-09-17 03:16 PM

A great reply Mark with your haiku!

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee

The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

3 posted 2000-09-17 03:16 PM

The moon and the night Melissa. . . what more do you need?

Wonderful my friend. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

Parker
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since 2000-01-06

Posts 3129
ON

4 posted 2000-09-17 03:39 PM

Crescent lovers light
Aglow on quiver of lips
Lovers moon tonight

Parker

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

5 posted 2000-09-18 03:36 PM

Thanks Sven for the compliment

Parker what a beautiful haiku you've added

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee

The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams

LngJhnAg
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since 1999-07-23

Posts 3508
Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion

6 posted 2000-09-18 03:45 PM

Cats in the moonlight,
Carousing and howling loud.
Well-thrown shoe ends it.

LngJhnAg
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since 1999-07-23

Posts 3508
Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion

7 posted 2000-09-18 03:54 PM

Melissa - Please forgive me - I seem to be in a kitty-kicker phase right now, and that tends to make me sort of devilish. I love your haiku - it is romantic and sweet.

Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

8 posted 2000-09-18 09:55 PM

Melissa,

Beautiful haiku my friend. Lovely!!

Lone Wolf

Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

Dee
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since 2000-08-19

Posts 2330
Queensland, Australia

9 posted 2000-09-19 04:26 PM

Melissa, very nice haiku. I admire any one who can write them as they have never been something I can do well.
Dee

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

10 posted 2000-09-19 04:35 PM

Moon kicked Mike in face
as the kitties he disgraced
shine on Moon, shine on

Oh, and Melissa? You did good, dear...especially in not listening to LJA...

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

11 posted 2002-01-18 03:49 PM

(sigh) You are sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, such love fills these gorgeous words! (smiles) May the moonbeams forever light your heart with joy, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Melissa, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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