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Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

0 posted 2000-09-17 03:00 PM

~BEAUTIFUL KISS SENRYU~

5-7-5

Sensual beauty
love's splendour in a soft kiss
two souls left breathless

*By Melissa Honeybee*

The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

1 posted 2000-09-17 03:17 PM

feather touch so light
sweet taste of you in passion
entwined hearts shall sing

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

2 posted 2000-09-17 03:17 PM

Melissa. . . I see that you're on a roll here. . . this is so soft and delicate. . . just wonderful. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2000-09-17 03:21 PM

Now I want to experience this one...James

Parker
Member Elite

since 2000-01-06

Posts 3129
ON

4 posted 2000-09-17 03:29 PM

Inhale last breath
of mingled sensual taste
spent with pleasures kiss

Parker

Melissa I just love the way you kiss...

Sage Elizabeth
New Member

since 2000-09-16

Posts 9

5 posted 2000-09-17 04:54 PM

Nice, very nice. You captured something beautiful. Sage

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

6 posted 2000-09-18 03:36 AM

Breathless touch of love
meshing upon tender flesh
two souls meet in kiss

Beth
Member

since 2000-07-06

Posts 468
WA, Australia

7 posted 2000-09-18 03:42 AM

~Stunningly beautiful!!~

~Cherie~

angelswing
Senior Member

since 2000-02-10

Posts 705
United Kingdom

8 posted 2000-09-18 04:19 AM

Cool nice, short and to the point, you managed to put a lot of depth meaning and emotion in that one .
Thanks a lot . L.of.L. Tom .

Don't try, do or do not, there is no try .
- Master Yoda -

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

9 posted 2000-09-18 04:53 AM

Melissa Honeybee.

sensual beauty
tasting one another's sweat
lasting impressions

Be well
Kethry

"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

10 posted 2000-09-18 03:34 PM

Wow, I didn't expect to get so many replies, thank you everyone!

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee

The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams

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