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Slim to None
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Slim to None I wonder why nobody wants to be with me. I wonder why? I wonder why no one seems to care for me. I wonder why... my hopes are next to impossible, my dreams seem unreachable, my feelings are all emotional, my desires totally regretable, my goals are usually unsetable, my accomplishments ungetable, and my heart so unobtainable. I wonder why my Love life is slim to none and I was just thinking you were the one til you said goodbye and now you don't have any time to tell me why. And it is becoming apparent to me that you don't need me like I need you and I wonder why. Jameslee@September16,2000 [This message has been edited by jmlee12345 (edited 09-16-2000).] |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
James, I wish I could reach through the screen and give you the biggest hug. I have been here so many times and I know the hurt all to well. Don't give hope my talented friend... your soulmate will come. rp25 |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thanks for the hug Rosepetals...I'll take all I can get....thanks for understanding the heart of this poem...James |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Good morning James, I read this poem yesterday, and didn't reply as I was in a hurry. But I thought about what you have written, and here I am. Very touching James, I know how you must feel. Keep plugging my friend, and it will happen, when you least expect it. My wishes, I pray will help. Bill |
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ddgoose Member
since 2000-07-25
Posts 250Baltimore, MD, USA |
James You expressed your feelings well and I can feel your hurt. You have friends here and I too wish I could hug you. Hang in there and keep writing. You are really marvelous! didi |
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Sage Elizabeth New Member
since 2000-09-16
Posts 9 |
Jmlee, This is a very touching poem. Filled up to the top with emotion and I have read it now a couple of times but have found it a little hard to reply to as it's content is quite sad. I hope you find your star. You write very well and I will look for more of your posts. Sage. |
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glorybox Junior Member
since 2000-09-17
Posts 26 |
the questions we ask ourselves why? why? why? we may know the answers we may know the answers before we even ask is it because of fate? of another day to bring another question? or the way of the utterly romantic and tragically woed? we are all alone, even with others. in our hearts, we think we have more. in our minds, we have only ourselves. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Bill, Didi, Sage and Glory Box for the nice responses..James |
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Romy Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170Plantation, Florida |
I think you captured an emotion that many of us have felt from time to time. Hang in there, if you are really writing this from the heart, when you least expect it, things will get better! Debbie |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
jmlee12345-I understand and have been there, I can only tell you to have faith that it will come in time and believe. A very tender piece from your heart and nicely felt. Hugs, you have a friend. |
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