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How do I miss her?
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How do I miss her? |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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How do I miss her? I miss the hugs of her embrace The gentle rubs upon my face The whispered breath close to my ear The very essence of her near. She is the wind that makes me fly She is the heavens to my eye That bids me in to walk and stroll The wondrous path within her soul. I miss the firefly of gleam I miss the transference of dream. I miss her love protective shield I miss the tenderness of yield. I miss the temperance of her choice I miss the music of her voice. I miss her fragrance and her charms I miss her heart beat in my arms. But most of all I miss her zeal The fact and physical of her feel. I miss the freedom of allow. I miss the moment of the now. The crime of things and times of clay Has up and taken her away. |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Wow this is sad and very good!!! Great work.... Julie :) |
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ddgoose Member
since 2000-07-25
Posts 250Baltimore, MD, USA |
Seymour My heart is crying - very beautifully written with such feelings. Bravo! didi |
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shadow of poetry Member
since 2000-07-22
Posts 76midwest usa |
I miss the hugs of her embrace The gentle rubs upon my face The whispered breath close to my ear The very essence of her near. She is the wind that makes me fly She is the heavens to my eye That bids me in to walk and stroll The wondrous path within her soul. ------------------ But most of all I miss her zeal The fact and physical of her feel. I miss the freedom of allow. I miss the moment of the now. The crime of things and times of clay Has up and taken her away. ----------------- well, i know im very glad i didnt miss this very very special poem ... wanna know why??? cause ...(ohhowilovewhenyouwritelikethis)  *smile* my sister is the poet I am but a shadow. by the light of poetry I read then dream |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Excellent spilling of the soul. Beautifully written and the pain is very easy to feel with you. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Seymour, This is full of happy memories, even with the sadness. It's a beautiful combination, and bittersweet in the end. Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
This is one of the loveliest poems I can remember, but sad at the end "Tabinesque" through and through Liz |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Julie, Thanks for the great. ddgoose. Thank you for the bravo. Shadow, And I love when you remark like this. Mark, Thank you for the simpatico. Sunny1, You read this poem through and through, thank you. Elizabeth, Tabinesque, how nice, Love Sy. |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
this was tender and touching, I really loved it.  ~Heather |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Sy, this is romantic, tender and so sad! I love every line of it! |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Well, Sy, you have just returned the favor and taken the words out of MY mouth. Thank you..... |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ This just has to be one of your best. I LOVE IT ! You've blown me away with the tenderness. How acutely you feel your words and convey them to the reader. Pretty gosh-darned great, I'd say ... and I just did !  Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
lovely, lovely, lovely... Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau" |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Oh, this is so poignant, brought tears to my eyes. Painfully, beautifully written. I wish you peace. Corinne |
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Cheryl Flemming Member
since 2000-09-14
Posts 102 |
This is so tender and full of emotion.Wonderfully written. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
X Angel, Thank you Heather. Wht Dove, Thank you for the beautiful words. Balladeer, We're swopping alot of words lately. Marge, I can only say I love you too. Temptress, Lovely comment. Corinne, Thank you sweet. Cheryl, Thank you for the read and comment. |
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