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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2000-09-15 07:55 AM



Thoughtographs
~*Marge Tindal*~

Tangerine bursting across the dawn
*click*

Fields of grass huddled in clumps new mown
*click*

Phosphorous waves neoning the shoreline at night
*click*

Saffron sunflowers dance in the breeze of early light
*click*




~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com



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1 posted 2000-09-15 07:56 AM


Ah such a colorful render Marge.  Each line a beautiful image in itself....I could even smell that new mown grass!  Bonnie
Mark Bohannan
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2 posted 2000-09-15 08:00 AM


So did you get double prints to share with your friend?  Wonderfully creative my poet and friend.
doreen peri
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3 posted 2000-09-15 08:38 AM


hey Marge! i really liked these a lot!  

the images and words sure click with me!  

[This message has been edited by doreen peri (edited 09-15-2000).]

Paula Finn
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4 posted 2000-09-15 12:14 PM


Let me get my book dear lady so I can add these to all the other wonderful Thoughtographs you have penned for me
Sudhir Iyer
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5 posted 2000-09-15 01:40 PM


Marvelous Marge Clicks Them All

*CLICK*  

regards
sudhir

Marsha
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6 posted 2000-09-15 05:35 PM


Magic Marge, just magic! Beauty is in the eye of the beholder so they say, and this is beauty.  
What a picture, just perfect.

nando
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7 posted 2000-09-15 05:55 PM


Marge...

I read this a couple of times and then started thinking...After sitting here with my blanket around my shoulders for a while I started making my own thoughtographs, and it was really quite nice...
Different poem but I enjoyed it a lot...

-nando-


Ask me how to live your life, and this to you I´ll say: make your choises true and wise, so that when tomorrow will arise, you´ll smile at yesterday...

Martie
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8 posted 2000-09-15 06:06 PM


Marge--you are so colorful, and these wonderful thoughts are great...love it!
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9 posted 2000-09-15 06:37 PM


very original, Marge ... well done ...
X Angel
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10 posted 2000-09-15 07:06 PM


amazing what a little creativity can do, nice job M

~H

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11 posted 2000-09-15 07:31 PM


Bonnie~
I'm so glad you enjoyed them.
They were fun to do.


MarkB~
Thanks, love.  Yep, ordered double prints.


Doreen~
I'm pleased to know you enjoyed them. Thanks.


Paula~
Awww! Thanks, my sweet friend.


Sudhir~
Just a'grinning for the camera.  Thank you.


Marsha~
I'm so glad to share thse with you and pleased you enjoyed.


Nando~
Ahhh !  If I made you think ... I'm pleased.
Thank you.


Martie~
Oh yes !  They are colorful .. I bought color film !  


MAMiller~
Thanks for letting me know you enjoyed them.


Heather~
Amazing indeed are the thoughtographs of poets ...
Thanks, hon.

~*Marge*~



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com



Denise
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12 posted 2000-09-15 08:08 PM


Very creative, Marge, and beautiful!  

Denise

[This message has been edited by dsnyder (edited 09-15-2000).]

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13 posted 2000-09-15 08:12 PM


My goodness, this is so unique! Not that I am surprised, just so very delighted to have found your "thoughtographs" here, Marge. Saffron sunflowers...such a pretty scene!

~ Claire

Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau


Wilfred Yeats
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14 posted 2000-09-15 08:28 PM


Everything beautiful from glorious grass to mellow yellow saffron - a lovely album of thoughtographs
BloomingRose
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15 posted 2000-09-15 11:24 PM


Marge,
You never cease to invent something new. What an imagination you have.  I love it!

Deb  

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16 posted 2000-09-15 11:29 PM


and everything is in panoramic, I'm sure...

Marge...continued inspiration in flight...

Eloise
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17 posted 2000-09-16 12:50 PM


So colorful and radiant. *click*  
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18 posted 2000-09-16 02:43 AM


What a great poem!  I love the colors!  That was definitely a most creative way to get the reader deep into those images!  Hope to see more like that!!
juliet_2u
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19 posted 2000-09-16 03:59 AM


Excellent as always my friend.
Big hugs,
Juls


Timeless, tested poet true,
Gifts of rhyme flow from you.
Pen in hand you do excell,
Your written Eden we yearn to dwell.

Beth
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20 posted 2000-09-16 04:18 AM



~I am sure many people could come up with their own thoughtographs but you put it in such a way that i want yours..LOL...Thanks for sharing this wonderful piece!!~


~Cherie~

Marge Tindal
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21 posted 2000-09-16 06:14 AM


Denise~
Thank you.  I just *clicked* away.


Claire~
Your delight is a pleasure to me. Thank you.


Wilfred~
Glad to know you enjoyed flipping through my album.


BloomingRose~
You leave such sweet thoughts and I appreciate you.


Karilea~
I feel so blessed to share little delights like this.
Hugs, my friend.


Eloise~
You leave me a smile and I thank you.


SnowPants~
Glad to know that you enjoyed them.
Welcome to Passions.
Thank you.


Juliet~
Thank you for leaving me a lovely verse to touch my heart.
Tickled to know you liked my thoughtographs.


Beth~
They are definitely for sharing.
Enjoy them, my dear.
And I thank you.


~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com



tracie66
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22 posted 2000-09-17 03:08 AM


~Marge~
Another adorable and colourful piece from you

~Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


grandiloquent
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23 posted 2000-09-17 03:24 AM



When you're late to post
You've lost your host
Of cultured sounding words

"unique original refreshing piece
with new improved refining gleans
make up Marge's fine photowork"

Alas, with the compliments taken
All my statements are forsaken…
I can only mutter "Nice job" in this quirk


I loved it, Marge! More More More!

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