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Senyrus of Love In Sleep
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Senyrus of Love In Sleep |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song 
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Senyrus of Love In Sleep Head rests upon chest tormented heart finding peace sleep now sighs in trust ~~~*~~~ Fear now swept away upon winds of love and trust gentle slumber came ~~~*~~~ Eyes dancing in dreams heart rests in tranquility angel in my arms ~~~*~~~ Gentle stretch in wake moan of rested soul and heart loving smile does glow Mark Bohannan [This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 09-15-2000).] |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
oh, these are very nice...soothing, loving. think i'll go back to bed and give my pillow a cuddle! LOL  ~Dawn "Steady as it comes, right down to you, I've said it all, so maybe we're a Bliss of another kind" Bliss-Tori Amos |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh Mark ... simply lovely, each and every one. I refuse to pick a favorite amongst them. Your love and trust shines brilliantly through these words ... she is a lucky lady, this one you write of! Beautiful my luminious friend!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Cowboy, my fanny ! ! This lady happens to think that you just may be the reincarnation of ALL the romantic poets of the past, rolled into one ! Man, these soft, sexy Senryu's are enough to make a lady break into a sweat ! ! And everybody knows ladies glisten !!  I imagine that when it's branding time, there'd be a LONG line of volunteers waiting ! !  In all seriousness ... these are pretty darned steamy ! Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Dawn-so happy am I that you found them soothing. Thank you much Kit-Why thank you my friend and I am glad you liked them all. I don't know if luck has anything to do with it but me being Irish sure don't hurt. Marge-ALLLLL of THEMMMM????? Gawd woman they would die all over again.lol....NO LINES just one sweet lady and a tattoo on the heart instead of the branding iron. Thank you my friend....love hearing from you always. |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
Sleep now rest in trust, no more torment in your heart with peace you now have, this is celestial! |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Mark, your soothing words bring peacefulness and calm. ...chanson~ Music, tonal clear & pure, Caresses the harshest of curves. -Song of Gesture |
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shadow of poetry Member
since 2000-07-22
Posts 76midwest usa |
sleep induced by peace quiet comfort in the night dreams of futures shared ~*~ Lullabye of love caressed and kissed by trusts touch sleep in angels arms ~*~ for those who actually sleep... the peace is precious. my sister is the poet I am but a shadow. by the light of poetry I read then dream |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
These are all lovely Mark. Enjoyed all. |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Mark, you certainly have put some wonderful dreams in this girl's head. Wonderful as always my friend. Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Rest in sweetness... love this! Deb |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Mark - Until I saw the yellow - I thought I was viewing patriotic Senryus - seriously - very very well done - beginning to believe all those things LngJhnAG says about you |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Mark - These are really great - sensual, sensitive, romantic. I can understand why you have three men posting and about a jillion women sighing - lol. Incidently, Mark, Bill is a LIAR - I didn't really MEAN those things... honest - lol |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Going back to grab my pillow... |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
rofl I can tell that I am suffering from lack of sleep. I thought the title was Senryus' of SHEEP. I was alll...uhhhh...nawww..I won't read it. Then ROFL I came back later and really read it...it was SLEEP. Sheesh Heather Nice btw, very nice ~Heather |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
what a wonderful format you have picked, one I havent seen in awhile...you do this beautifully.....the poem I love, the last stanza my favorite... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Mark--Just the word senyrus is sensual, but these lovely pieces are tender and loving as well...she is lucky!! (whoever she is) |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Mark, the words and the visual presentation are terrific. Ya got class to spare! |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Rosebud1229-Thank you so much...glad you saw the stars. chansondegeste-so are you down for a nap now? Thank you much. shadow of poetry- Angel sleeps in arms cowboy caresses her wings angel wakes in love Victoria-I am so happy that you enjoyed them all. Marina-Like your dreams do ya? Makes cowboy smile. Deb-Thank you much. Wilfred-would you really want to believe a pirate of his class? Thank you so much. LngJhnAg-hhhmmmm a pirate concerned about what a cowboy would believe....what is wrong with this picture? Thank you kinkly sir and I KNOW YOU DID mean them. Karilea-Make it two please. Heather-I am so glad that you decided to come back and read. Thank you much. Greeneyes-Thank you so much glad you liked them. Martie-*wink*---sensual huh?....why thank you friend. It is I who is the lucky Irishman...don't ya think? Balladeer-See what looking up to the likes of you gets me, now I got class!!!!! WOW I kinda like havin a tid bit of the class in ma blood. Thankeeeeee much kind sir! [This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 09-15-2000).] |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Should be treasures of love...for each one is. I loved em all, but this one was special! Fear now swept away upon winds of love and trust gentle slumber came |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Oh my dear poetic friend, what a poet you truly are. I'm in awe once again. Sighing deeply here. Juls |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Mark, ~sighs~ This makes me want to crawl in to bed and sleeeeep, especially since I just got home from work hehe Very well done rp25 |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
As I drift off to sleep tonight I shall hear these lovely words dance on angel wings ....so very beautiful among the stars and moonglow~ |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
funny how I can read white here...and gold elsewhere... two, 'tis... |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
WhtDove-I am so happy that you found one you liked best. Juls-Leaving you in awe makes me smile. Thank you much. rosepetals25-so go to bed already...lol...glad you found them comfortable Holly-Dancing on angelwings is the same as in your heart. Thank you and I am so glad you found them comforting. Karilea-here you go kiddo: Senyrus of Love In Sleep Head rests upon chest tormented heart finding peace sleep now sighs in trust ~~~*~~~ Fear now swept away upon winds of love and trust gentle slumber came ~~~*~~~ Eyes dancing in dreams heart rests in tranquility angel in my arms ~~~*~~~ Gentle stretch in wake moan of rested soul and heart loving smile does glow Mark Bohannan Hope that helps you and thank you my friend. |
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Beth Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468WA, Australia |
~Simply beautiful Mark!!~ ~Cherie~ |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Beth - Why thank you my friend....nice to see you here...when are we going to be blessed with one of your poems again? |
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