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To Love, "Alone
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To Love, "Alone |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Just a note to let you know you no longer cry alone my hand trembles in recoil my heart grieves amid love's spoil and if it's all your comfort due, in misery, I'm company. left in ponder at this whim, no surprise alone again cold shoulder all I've ever known. I need to learn to love, "alone". |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
serenity, wonderful so wonderful is this piece. I interpret it for a certain state I seem to be going through. Thanks for that, dear poet. Parker |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
Serenity so sad but yet so beautiful in the essence of the words sometimes we do think we are better off alone I just hope someone out there will renew your love and show you the real love they can offer for only you. |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Serenity, A wonderful friend once told me there is no good end, if it can't be sweet, let it be short. You are so right, but now I have to teach this soul of mine this oh so powerful wisdom. I bid you wisdom to take away the pain and remember what this friend of mine told me. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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AniKay83 Member
since 2000-06-28
Posts 388Missing Since 1999 |
I think it's important to learn to love alone before you try to love someone else. You gotta be happy with yourself! Great poem. .*.*.*.Krissie.*.*.*. "I'm sorry for telling u love was unnecessary... making u lose ur way. I'm sure I'll be as sad as u feel." ~Touch and Go |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
(((((Parker)))))!!! Thanks me bud, sorry tho, that you could relate to this... rose--I thank you for your sweet comments, and Cerenity, y'know, that is some smart friend you have there, bet she's good-lookin' too!!! Think I'll have to take that advice...and hopefully t'nite, I'll dream sweet...thank you, for the reminder...hugs. And AniKay, you got by me there! but thank you for your wonderful comments. [This message has been edited by serenity (edited 08-03-2000).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
ouch me twin.. this one stings... patience is a virtue...but i was never good a being virtuous  hugs to ya me sweet... me loves ya me |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
The pains of love have invaded your heart my dear. This is a beautiful poem and with deep sorrow i can relate. Thanks, Rich |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
serenity, this touched me too. Loving "alone" is a sad state, to be sure, and one I am far too familiar with. Thank you for sharing these feelings so poetically. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
The pain in this is very clear.....you have said a mouth full in such a short verse and it was written beautifully. |
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