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eyesplus2
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since 2000-03-02
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0 posted 2000-09-14 05:03 AM



A new day dawns in this place.......
A new life starts here today......

The deep night of despair passes.......
Passes into the bright morning of joy.......

Today we are reborn.........
I and you become.....

We and Us........

For today we said.......
I do.......

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Mona Lisa
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since 1999-08-25
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Halifax, Nova Scotia
1 posted 2000-09-14 06:03 AM


I liked this poem.  It is short, simple and conveyed a meaningful message with few words.

[This message has been edited by Mona Lisa (edited 09-14-2000).]

Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
2 posted 2000-09-14 08:26 AM


Good poem, well done.
Kethry


"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

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