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Poetry Sucks!!!!
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Poetry Sucks!!!! |
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linda munday Member
since 2000-06-17
Posts 315Adelaide, Australia 
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Poetry Sucks!!!! The words that are written about various things Are painful at times to extract from within They force you to think about heartaches sometimes Then flip you around with some words of sunshine The mind is the trap and it's trying to catch The things of this world that time tries to snatch So even when pain is the only thing real Put your pen to the paper, explain how you feel Feel the pain be released and write what's within Let your heart feel the pain, But let poetry WIN ! |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Now thats a title that should reel in the writers ... LOL ... nice thoughts good advice  Rex |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
It's just the writing of it actually, LOL...I know, I know, I know how you feel tho! Well said. |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
poetry sucks and love bites, but still we are hooked on them both Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Well....the title grabbed me, and I thoroughly enjoyed myself here!! Nice job!!< !signature--> I have but one goal in life......... To make you smile! ~~ Sunny ~~ [This message has been edited by Sunny1 (edited 08-03-2000).] |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Poetry Sucks!!!! The words that are written about various things Are painful at times to extract from within They force you to think about heartaches sometimes Then flip you around with some words of sunshine The mind is the trap and it's trying to catch The things of this world that time tries to snatch So even when pain is the only thing real Put your pen to the paper, explain how you feel Feel the pain be released and write what's within Let your heart feel the pain, But let poetry WIN ! That is one title that will grab the crowds by the dozen. You said it wonderfully and I bow to your wit and talent. |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Amen! And Thanks! [Boy, I thought I was going to have to come in here and wring some....glad to see that you explained it!] Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
I wanted to scream in tearing all things apart... shouting all the unprintable expletives.... but then I calmed myself and read this one, once, twice and thrice... and peace of mind found me.... YEAH LET POETRY WIN!!! and add to it what Jamie says... regards, Sudhir |
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linda munday Member
since 2000-06-17
Posts 315Adelaide, Australia |
hello my fellow suckers.. I had to write it.... sorry guys... Ain't it the truth but......lol Linda M. |
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