navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #9 » One Special Star
Open Poetry #9
Post A Reply Post New Topic One Special Star Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Rosebud1229
Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813
North Carolina

0 posted 2000-09-12 01:20 PM


In the darkest sky,
There was one twinkle,
that caught my eyes.
As I wished upon this star,
something special happened.
For when my gaze fail away,
back to the ground.
I saw you there,
as my eyes gazed into yours,
heaven opened up,
and all the angels danced
to the magic as we became one
in that moment of time,
that I wished upon a star.

© Copyright 2000 Rose - All Rights Reserved
Trew
Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365
Ottawa, Canada
1 posted 2000-09-13 02:49 AM


Mmmmm... love!  
Perhaps the most written about of all emotions.  It never ceases to touch me, though.  A beautiful poem, Rosebud.  If it is from a life experience, I salute you!  So many people take the love of others for granted.  It's a gift we should celebrate every day!

Trev.

Rosebud1229
Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813
North Carolina
2 posted 2000-09-13 10:10 AM


thank you so much! Love is truly a gift sometimes we take for granted.
Alan
Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499
right next door
3 posted 2000-09-13 10:31 AM


Very nice. I have made that wish before .
I look forward to more of your work.

Butterflies_dont_cry
Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733
Michigan
4 posted 2000-09-13 11:54 AM


Not to long ago I wished on a star...I'll
cherish it just the way you have
woven..beautiful work~

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song
5 posted 2000-09-14 02:13 AM


If you only knew.......All I can say  is that this was not only a wonderful verse but it hit's home with me deeper than I can share with you. Beautiful write!!!



[This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 09-14-2000).]

Irish Rose
Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

6 posted 2000-09-14 07:15 AM


This is lovely in word and form, I really enjoyed this one.

Kathleen


Marge Tindal
Deputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores
7 posted 2000-09-14 07:20 AM


RoseBud~
Seems you've set the twinkle
in many a heart today.

Great thoughts, my friend.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com



Rosebud1229
Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813
North Carolina
8 posted 2000-09-14 05:07 PM


thank you so much Alan, It's very nice to meet you, there's something about the heavens that puts a twinkle within our heart, just looking at them and you know everything will be shall we say heavenly!

Thank you butterflies don't cry, I appreciate your words and also all the
replies that warm my heart

Thank you Mark, I am very glad you enjoyed to get such a compliment makes me smile, because you know you always touch my heart with your poems, Make a wish upon a star! It makes for a beautiful night.

Irish Rose I'm so glad you enjoyed

Marge thank you so much, your a great poet to inspire, which you truly inspire me everytime I read your poems.

Wilfred Yeats
Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704
Wilmington, Delaware
9 posted 2000-09-14 06:49 PM


you have my word - i'll be scanning the night sky early  - wonderful poem Rosebud
Rosebud1229
Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813
North Carolina
10 posted 2000-09-14 10:26 PM


yes Wilfred there is something quite amazing about the night and all the millions of stars, but it only takes one twinkling star to wish upon.
Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #9 » One Special Star

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary