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Rosebud1229
Senior Member

since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

0 posted 2000-09-12 01:20 PM

In the darkest sky,
There was one twinkle,
that caught my eyes.
As I wished upon this star,
something special happened.
For when my gaze fail away,
back to the ground.
I saw you there,
as my eyes gazed into yours,
heaven opened up,
and all the angels danced
to the magic as we became one
in that moment of time,
that I wished upon a star.

Trew
Member

since 2000-06-10

Posts 365
Ottawa, Canada

1 posted 2000-09-13 02:49 AM

Mmmmm... love!

Perhaps the most written about of all emotions. It never ceases to touch me, though. A beautiful poem, Rosebud. If it is from a life experience, I salute you! So many people take the love of others for granted. It's a gift we should celebrate every day!

Trev.

Rosebud1229
Senior Member

since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

2 posted 2000-09-13 10:10 AM

thank you so much! Love is truly a gift sometimes we take for granted.

Alan
Senior Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

3 posted 2000-09-13 10:31 AM

Very nice. I have made that wish before .
I look forward to more of your work.

Butterflies_dont_cry
Member Elite

since 2000-03-06

Posts 3733
Michigan

4 posted 2000-09-13 11:54 AM

Not to long ago I wished on a star...I'll
cherish it just the way you have
woven..beautiful work~

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

5 posted 2000-09-14 02:13 AM

If you only knew.......All I can say is that this was not only a wonderful verse but it hit's home with me deeper than I can share with you. Beautiful write!!!

[This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 09-14-2000).]

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

6 posted 2000-09-14 07:15 AM

This is lovely in word and form, I really enjoyed this one.

Kathleen

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

7 posted 2000-09-14 07:20 AM

RoseBud~
Seems you've set the twinkle
in many a heart today.

Great thoughts, my friend.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Rosebud1229
Senior Member

since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

8 posted 2000-09-14 05:07 PM

thank you so much Alan, It's very nice to meet you, there's something about the heavens that puts a twinkle within our heart, just looking at them and you know everything will be shall we say heavenly!

Thank you butterflies don't cry, I appreciate your words and also all the
replies that warm my heart

Thank you Mark, I am very glad you enjoyed to get such a compliment makes me smile, because you know you always touch my heart with your poems, Make a wish upon a star! It makes for a beautiful night.

Irish Rose I'm so glad you enjoyed

Marge thank you so much, your a great poet to inspire, which you truly inspire me everytime I read your poems.

Wilfred Yeats
Member Elite

since 2000-08-04

Posts 2704
Wilmington, Delaware

9 posted 2000-09-14 06:49 PM

you have my word - i'll be scanning the night sky early - wonderful poem Rosebud

Rosebud1229
Senior Member

since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

10 posted 2000-09-14 10:26 PM

yes Wilfred there is something quite amazing about the night and all the millions of stars, but it only takes one twinkling star to wish upon.

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