Somebody Delete This I'm Really Sleepy. Part 3

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Open Poetry #9

Somebody Delete This I'm Really Sleepy. Part 3

wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22

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TEXAS (it's all big)

0 posted 2000-09-11 11:30 PM

Where’s the beauty? Blood shot eyes.
You set the clock to ‘early rise’
You started from its pepped crescendo
See? Time flies right out the window

It’s good to sit and think a bit
But head ‘tween knees I see you sit
Where’s the beauty? Blood shot eyes.
Surely not there ‘tween your thighs

The Thinker sits sometimes as you
Turn your head that’s what he’ll do
His blood shot eyes are cast in bronze
His hand on chin he thinks of blondes

In closing eyes I can find the truth
My realize-ation: It's not my youth
Are green statues at one time bronze
So there (sticking out tongue) at those blondes.

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2000-09-12 12:24 PM

deleting this would be such a blonde thing to do...sigh, walt, as always, loving the view from Walty World...I like the perspective in this piece...very cool.

Severn
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

2 posted 2000-09-12 03:15 AM

LOL - weirdo Walty...

And, in closing, it is good to know that your real eyes are green...

why the so there?

K

"He looked across the
silky surface of the Severn...
it was a famously difficult
river with fierce tides..."

From Jack Maggs

wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22

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3 posted 2000-09-12 06:11 AM

actually they are blue but yuh the statue o liberty ne'er was blue no.. thanky!!

Kitty**
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since 1999-07-27

Posts 428
Charlottesville,VA USA

4 posted 2000-09-12 08:31 AM

I summed this up as a blond thing..;-)

If you can't make it so,
you need to let it go!

wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22

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5 posted 2000-09-12 06:32 PM

yuh yuh and yuh

Butterflies_dont_cry
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since 2000-03-06

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Michigan

6 posted 2000-09-12 11:24 PM

Ahhhhhhhhh but there is that "more fun" thing! The sleepier I am the more this all makes sense....

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