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Elizabeth Santos
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since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

0 posted 2000-09-11 06:35 AM


Black and White

There was a little girl in black and white
Looking through a colored Christmas book
Sitting on a couch at mother’s side
Her sister leaning front to take a look

Beside them stood a tree in black and white
With colored balls of glass and colored lights
And tinsel hanging down from every branch
Glittering in the season’s magic nights

But nothing was more glowing at the time
Than the face of those two little girls agaze
At pages of a brand new Christmas book
With pop up pictures drawing their amaze

The little blond in dress of black and white
A bow of pink to match, held curls back tight
Her sister wore a pretty dress of blue
And patten leather shoes in black and white

The pure and loving gratefulness pours out
From little girls in radiant joy and grace
With so few gifts and yet such happiness
Was of another time but of this place

A long lost photograph from childhood
The memories erased the black and white
And all the Christmas colors of the tree
Glowed out from that sweet picture in the night

How tender were those days, so poor yet rich
That we would be enraptured with delight
Looking at a pop up picture book
So thankful and so blessed that Christmas night

My children see now things I couldn’t explain
In candid black and white the simple truth
The little things that brought such treasured joy
In the innocence and beauty of my youth

A moment of my past is brought to light
In a simple photograph in black and white

Elizabeth Santos

© Copyright 2000 Elizabeth Santos - All Rights Reserved
Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium
1 posted 2000-09-11 06:40 AM


My children see now things I couldn’t explain
In candid black and white the simple truth
The little things that brought such treasured joy
In the innocence and beauty of my youth

A moment of my past is brought to light
In a simple photograph in black and white


....
I absolutely want to write like you do...
WOW, Liz, WOW

regards,
sudhir

Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada
2 posted 2000-09-11 06:44 AM


What a beautiful picture you've painted with your words Liz ... I can see the photograph and the lovely memories as if they were my own. Wonderful!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

Marge Tindal
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Florida's Foreverly Shores
3 posted 2000-09-11 08:01 AM


Elizabeth~
It's as though you took me back to the photograph album
of much of my youth.
The camera halted the scene in black and white
and my memory tints it in the colors I recall.

A special pen has sent your precious words
to this page on this day.
I thank you for the nostalgia.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com



Mark Bohannan
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since 2000-06-21
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In the winds of Cherokee song
4 posted 2000-09-11 11:17 AM


With read of yours it is like stepping into your mind and heart a feeling your soul.  You paint your words so well it is hard NOT to get lost in them.  You are an amazing talent my friend.
suthern
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since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723
Louisiana
5 posted 2000-09-12 07:22 PM


Sometimes photographs are painful... but much more often, they take us on a lovely visit into memories that leave us with a glow... this poem shines into all our hearts.
Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
6 posted 2000-09-12 08:27 PM


Elizabeth,
You are very talented this is a lovely poem.
Love Sy

Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

7 posted 2000-09-12 08:47 PM


So many things were so much simpler back then, weren't they, Elizabeth? This is a beautiful expression!

Denise

Butterflies_dont_cry
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since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733
Michigan
8 posted 2000-09-12 10:03 PM


So eloquently expressed...there is truly
nothing black and white about this
piece...it shines rainbows!!! Beautifully
done~

Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
9 posted 2000-09-12 10:45 PM


Yes, I've oft noticed the glisten
of icicles on trees
in black and white photographs
what joyous memories...

wonderful walk with you, Elizabeth...

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