Open Poetry #9 |
To A Friend |
Ann Member
since 2000-07-07
Posts 64Australia |
The first time I saw you I thought nothing of it You were just another person In this world I had met. Little did I know from that first day, you would Become a good friend - important in many ways. The days went by and still you were there Many tears and laughter in time did we share. Gradually you revealed some of your Dreams and hopes while in some my lowest times it Was you who helped me cope. It is you who can always make me laugh when this World gets me down and life seems too rough. I'm so thankful for that day that you First passed my way, and all the times since Then you changed my dark clouds into rays It's so often neglected to appreciate Someone so true and so I write this poem to say Friend- thank you. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Ann: Welcome to Passions!! I love the gentle sincerity in this one. Hope to read more. Kathleen |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This is a sweet and lovely tribute to a friend...thanks for sharing it, Ann. |
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Ann Member
since 2000-07-07
Posts 64Australia |
Thank you Irish Rose and Serenity for your kind comments i appreciate it..... God bless and smile! |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Wonderful. Its printed and will soon be on its way to a very good friend of mine. This is what I have been looking for! |
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Ann Member
since 2000-07-07
Posts 64Australia |
Thanks Temptress! I'm glad you liked my poem and I hope you're friend will as well...God bless you both and all the best for the future! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A tender display of appreciation for a friend...James |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Wonderful Writing... WELCOME TO PASSIONS regards, sudhir |
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Ann Member
since 2000-07-07
Posts 64Australia |
Thanks James for the nice comment and thanks Sudhir for welcoming me to passions for poetry. I've read both your poems and you have wonderful talent.... God bless and smile! |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Tender sincerity for a friend you have penned here. Full of heart and it shows well. |
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Trew Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Ottawa, Canada |
Ann, What a wonderful piece of writing. You must have a very special friend to deserve such a tribute! Welcome to Passions and I hope to read more of your works soon. Trev. |
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