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Remember I Love You
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Remember I Love You |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Remember I Love You Love remains precious and dear and listens not to those desperately pleading for Love to appear. So Love please forget my desperate plea my heart only wants the Love you freely give to me. I will not scream... "Love why aren't you here." I will not beg... "Love please appear!" I will not cry... "Love have you passed me by?" I will not say... "Love come and take my loneliness away." I'll tell all who will listen where the beauty of Love lies. It can be found gazing into a sweethearts eyes. And the beauty of Love can be seen in a butterflies silky wings landing on multi-colored tropical flowers sprinkling Loves gentle caress and spreading Loves awesome power. So Love remember I Love you and I want to share all the beauty of Love with you. Jameslee@September11,2000 [This message has been edited by jmlee12345 (edited 09-10-2000).] |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
I'm sprinking the "love" around these "love"ly words James ... wise sentiments, and very nicely penned!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This is delicate and intricate...and gracefully penned. I like this one very much. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
James~ A lovely offering of your heart. Love often comes so unaware and catches you in the blink of an eye ... ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
James, your words fall so sweetly and sincerely. Take care, Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
As softly as the rain falls upon the flowers and makes them bloom so does love fall when we least expect it.It doesn't always take a gigantic deed to meet loves need sometimes the simple little things show it even more. This was so beautiful and so true Jmlee |
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ddgoose Member
since 2000-07-25
Posts 250Baltimore, MD, USA |
Oh James - you certainly are a romantic. The words are so sweet and gentle. Very nicely done. didi |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
hi JAMES, A lovely poem... You touch upon sentiments of many... Coco |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Beautiful poem James Expressed very well!~ Tara ~ "A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
James, Beautiful writing from your heart once again my friend. This is lovely and romantic . . . so sincere. I hope she feels the same. Lone Wolf Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
James...isnt that how it is? You search and search and find no one...then WHAM...there she/he is...right there where she always was...but the one place you never looked...you will find her...I just know it. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Excellent James. . . your words become more and more from your heart every day. . . You will find her my friend. . . Superb. . . ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
written with such a heartfelt "tip" pen.... I so enjoyed your lovely expression... Greeneyes |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I appreciate all the wonderful remarks...my heart is happy and I am smiling...James |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Beautifully written James. Love is all around it's just that sometimes we forget to look. I know you don't but then you have the eyes of a poet, and know that if you open your eyes it's there. Take care!  |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
NICELY WRITTEN!!!!!!!!!! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you sincerely Marsha and vandana...James |
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