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lucky
Senior Member

since 2000-01-17

Posts 1601
Idaho

0 posted 2000-09-09 03:11 PM

The Legend

lives on from a

mother on down to a begotten son with
country parents always hanging around, born
to howl—may be somewhat dubious, but the lyrics
herein were found, as evidenced on the extraordinary
mountain cliffs of Idaho and are indisputably scraps of
lateness. It’s so nice to explore the arts of living on the
soil of poetry blues and prose after all it is your ballad
no matter how shallow and silly going not much soul
to it and I know how people get tired of being told
it kind of conservative and loads of other people
are too on its own terms—established formally
by the voice dominated screaming at you
with fourteen streaming audio midi’s to
bring you their precious love which
might I say is truly a triumph &
every bit as undeniable as
these rainy day blooz
sitting on cobbled
stones counting
time and tones
of then just reeling
like your dry & rid of me

then lonely turns to walk away
but suddenly realize they were
clearly only abstractions which
could be real so you keep
on jaunting down the
passage.

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If I could paint a portrait, of this life in which I've led, and somehow sketch a story, of the visions in my head, I'd start out with a canvas, stretched tightly in a frame, and in the bottom corner, I'd leave room to sign my name. (Michelle A. Bartley)

[This message has been edited by lucky (edited 09-09-2000).]

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2000-09-09 03:24 PM

Lucky ! ! !
'Bout time you got your sorry butt back here !

Where ya' been you 'legend'-in-the-making ?

No excuse is good enough !
*Hugs* to you and Rosemary !
Hope all is well in your corner of the world.
Love ya'

*Oh, yeah ... forgot to mention that,
as usual, I enjoyed your write and the
captivating format.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Mike
Member Elite

since 1999-06-19

Posts 2462

2 posted 2000-09-09 07:02 PM

interesting read.. enjoyed.

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

3 posted 2000-09-10 10:31 AM

Ah...the Legendary Lucky has returned!!! Have missed your poetic musings, m'friend.
And I do so love yer message here, and as always the presentation is envy-inspiring...

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

4 posted 2000-09-10 11:18 AM

Hi Lucky...was about to e mail you...for the missing...of your jazz and the music of your poetic thoughts..hugs to you and Rosemary.

lucky
Senior Member

since 2000-01-17

Posts 1601
Idaho

5 posted 2000-09-10 04:06 PM

Thanks you guys... Moving takes a lot out of a person sorry if my writing sounds like scrambled eggs I guess it's the way my head feels.

Thank you again

Rosemary J. Gwaltney
Senior Member

since 1999-08-26

Posts 997
northern mountains, Idaho

6 posted 2000-09-11 02:59 PM

Sigh - yes, you are my own personal legend, and your writing always lifts my soul. I love you dearly, my sweetheart.

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

7 posted 2000-09-11 03:05 PM

This is exquisite in form and content...

regards,
sudhir

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