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First Night with You (by Bill Charles & Sunny1)
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First Night with You (by Bill Charles & Sunny1) |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England 
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[A poem meant for two] < !signature-->[He] A moonbeam shone down out of the night, I could see it caress your face. Your deep eyes sparkled like diamonds, Soft like my heart, As it beat to a faster pace... [She] I will cast my spell with moonbeams, Take them from the jeweled sky, Steal a shooting star that glitters, For the sparkle in your eye…... [He] This moonbeam bathed you with it’s brilliance, Your body shining in the night. I can now see your inner beauty, A heavenly and so breathtaking a sight. [She] Now I feel your body trembling, As you step within the light… You are aglow and bathed in magic, You are mine this special night. [He] I stared and gazed upon you, In wonderment I felt from within. The passions that I only had for you, Anyone else would think it a sin. [She] And I look at you in wonder, Seeing all your love within… You have brought my flame to fire, Surely this is not a sin. [He] The light upon you never dimmed, As I watched you standing there. The radiance of you started an aurora, And it came through your beauty, as it dared. [She] Northern lights cascade in silence, Our gift from all the gods above… A sign of everlasting wonder, Blessed on this first night of love... [He} My heart swelled within me, As this was a most beautiful sight. My angel I know has touched you, While you stood there in the light. [She] Colors flow in veils between us, Drape us in a shimmering mist… Ever moving, gently touching, Soft…as though from angels kissed. [He] I ached and wanted to embrace, Nervous was I, as I asked if I might Then slowly was I touched by your moonbeam, As it shown through in the middle of this night. [She] The magic overcame me, As I ached with need for you this night I longed to wrap my love around you, There, within the moon’s soft light. [He] Tenderly our fingers touched, Melting together as they would do. Becoming one together in that moonbeam, Tenderly, as this was my first night with you... [She] And when we touched and melted... Tenderly to join, as lovers do… Within the gentle moonbeam, Love began, on my first night, With you... We hope you enjoyed our offering. The part of [He] was played by Bill The part of [She] was played by Sunny1. Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! [This message has been edited by Sunny1 (edited 09-09-2000).] |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
I applaud the entire cast of characters though it only be two.....more applause for each and a bow from me to you both. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Mark.... We humbly accept such wonderful words of praise, and will return them to you at your earliest convenience......Thank you! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Hello Sunny, Let me thank you for all the work that you put into this writing of ours. It's as beautiful now as it was when we first wrote it. Thanks Sunny, your a dream to work with. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Really really romantic. "The light upon you never dimmed, as I watched you standing there. The radiance of you started an aurora, and it came thru your beauty as it dared." "The magic overcame me as I ached with need for you this night I longed to wrap my love around you there within the moon's soft light." You have both unwrapped some beautiful delicate layers of desire awaiting their romantic moments...James |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sunny1 and Bill, This was so well crafted and the spotlight did not dim until the last whispered promise. So beautiful. Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hello Bill....... Working with you was my pleasure, and hopefully there will be more!! It was, and is a joint effort....... You're great to work with, too! Hi James...... A little romance is good for the soul, and I have Bill to thank for he put the initial beauty into this wonderful piece! Hi Kethry...... I hope that we will have more for that spotlight......Bill is a marvel. We're both so happy to see you here, and thank you for your words!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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ddgoose Member
since 2000-07-25
Posts 250Baltimore, MD, USA |
Sunny and Bill Each poem that you two write together is like going on a romantic adventure. Your words are beautiful and they tell a breathtaking story. Great poem. didi |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
What a wonderful duet. You two should form a band and go on the road..I love the interchange, so entirely natural. Catalinamoon |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi didi.... Oh...that is so nice, my friend. Everybody needs a little romance in their life and I've been so blessed to work with Mr. Romance himself, and I'm serious. We have a lot of fun sharing, and it's nice to share with good friends!! Thank you!! Hi catalinamoon.... That is an excellent idea, and as we're both gypsies, we'd probably have a great time with the music and poetry!!! It feels natural and Bill adds such a special touch!! Thank you!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
to quote James: "You have both unwrapped some beautiful delicate layers of desire awaiting their romantic moments" - I could say it no better - great write you two |
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shy lady Junior Member
since 2000-09-02
Posts 10 |
This is so magical and soft! I can see the whole scene inside my head..sounds like a fantasy I have! Shy Lady |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Wilfred.... We thank you for your reply and appreciate you stopping by!! shy lady.... It is always a pleasure to contribute to your fantasies!! Thank you... Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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