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spiked
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since 2000-01-13
Posts 873
Hammond, La USA

0 posted 2000-09-08 03:17 PM


It's hard to move forward
When your mind keeps looking back
It's hard to know what you want
When all that you wanted is now a bitter memory
It's hard to feel pain
When pain is  all that you have felt
It's hard to remain
When you know not what you are remaining for
It's hard to have dreams
When your mind is fogged and shadowed
It's hard to contain
The anger of misdirected paths
It's hard to look past
The eyes of a beautiful woman
What I am saying here can be
constued in many different ways
but the point I am trying to make is
It's Hard


© Copyright 2000 Richard Rendall - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2000-09-08 03:26 PM


Its hard not to desire a woman...James
serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

2 posted 2000-09-08 06:02 PM


again...glad to hear that there are signs of life in you again, *wink*---be happy, okay?
Butterflies_dont_cry
Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733
Michigan
3 posted 2000-09-08 06:15 PM


It's hard....but you have done it...by not
doing it...ok did that make sense? Great
work~

spiked
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since 2000-01-13
Posts 873
Hammond, La USA
4 posted 2000-09-10 09:39 PM


Thank you James, Serenity and butterflies and yes butterflies I do know what you mean.
Rich

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