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linda munday
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since 2000-06-17
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Adelaide, Australia

0 posted 2000-09-08 05:10 AM


Velvet  Love

You are my velvet pillow
Rose petals on my cheek
You are my satin soul mate
Soft words you always speak

With lace and mist you soothe my mind
Enwrapped within your wing
You are my silver chalice
My heart begins to sing

A sueded touch of fingers hold
My body close to yours
With kisses silken in their touch
We both begin to soar

On cotton clouds you are my dream
We dance like turtle doves
I cannot hold you long enough
My essence and true love


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Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26
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1 posted 2000-09-08 05:11 AM


On cotton clouds you are my dream
We dance like turtle doves
I cannot hold you long enough
My essence and true love
....

Truly Magnificent....

Nice work...

regards,
sudhir

Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2000-09-08 07:14 AM


Linda~
Very softly portrayed.
A really nice read.
~*Marge*~


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Beth
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since 2000-07-06
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WA, Australia
3 posted 2000-09-08 07:29 AM


~Very beautifull!!~

~Cherie~

Mark Bohannan
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4 posted 2000-09-08 07:52 AM


Oh wow this one is so sweet.  Loved this alot
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