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Juice
New Member

since 2000-09-08

Posts 7
Pennsylvania USA

0 posted 2000-09-08 01:15 AM

I didn't want to leave
but I had no choice
a couple hugs
a longing glance
and I leave
without a chance
I can still hear your voice
I'm home now, alone
but I never really left it seems
You're still here
    in my arms
    in the rain
    in the night
    in my dreams
here I'm not alone
I trace the lines of your face with my fingers
then run them through your hair
your scent takes over me
this isn't fair
I pull you closer and touch you lips
I can't resist
the rain begins to glow
thunder rolls in the distance
the time is now, I know
our lips meet in a flash of lightining and a thunder clap
Lost in the storm
it's over, I begin to shake
with my arms around your waist
I rest my head in your lap
you stroke my head and make me feel
like I'm the most important man in existance
I grip you tighter and close my eyes
the storm thunders again in the distance
I open my eyes
I am alone
and in my arms, my pillow that
    felt like you
    smelled like you
    sounded like you
as if I heard you speak
it was just a dream that didn't happen tonight
But there is always next week

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

1 posted 2000-09-08 01:22 AM

Yes there is always next week and always a year of tomorrows ahead of you as well...Beautifully written and WELCOME TO PASSIONS

tracie66
Member Elite

since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

2 posted 2000-09-08 01:59 AM

Welcome to passions Juice
This was wonderfully written and I enjoyed the read...well done

Hope next week rocks around real soon for you.
Tracie~

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe

anomaly187
Member

since 2000-06-15

Posts 284
San Francisco,CA,US

3 posted 2000-09-08 02:11 AM

wow that was really a beautiful poem..one of those moments where i am pretty much speachless so just keep it up.

Now night arrives with her purple legions
Retire now to your tents & to your dreams
Tomorrow we enter the town of my birth
I want to be ready. - JM

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

4 posted 2000-09-08 02:51 AM

Juice,
you deserve to be squeezed over this poem. it is really lovely.
(Hugs)
Kethry

"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

5 posted 2000-09-08 03:26 AM

Welcome to Passions...and what a slendid entrance you have made...love this storm...

JulieAnn
Senior Member

since 2000-06-12

Posts 754
Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!!

6 posted 2000-09-08 05:18 AM

Juice....welcome to Passions....i loved this post....it brouhgt images of a lonley man alone at night...I could see him clutching his pillow.....great writing...

Julie :)

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

7 posted 2000-09-08 12:56 PM

A great way to enter the family....

WELCOME TO PASSIONS

regards,
sudhir

tulip
Member

since 1999-07-04

Posts 320
unknown

8 posted 2000-09-08 04:51 PM

Juice,
This was beautifully written!!!

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