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Open Poetry #9
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UNC STAR
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since 2000-06-19
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Hinesville,Ga,USA
0 posted 2000-09-07 08:23 PM


It's dark but I can see the light shine so bright
but it is dimming because there is no moonlight
or it it shining because the sun was out at night
but was is it about this verse that is not right.
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Marina
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since 2000-02-10
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Pickering, Ontario
1 posted 2000-09-08 11:02 AM

An interesting verse.

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Marina

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Marina Crossley
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