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Erotically Speaking (For Wilfred)
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Erotically Speaking (For Wilfred) |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania 
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Erotically Speaking I was feeling a bit eroticky In a sensual kind of way Thought a bit of curiosity Might blow my cares away I decided quite quixotically Adult Forum was the sway A verse that’s penned erotically Was the ticket of the day So I settled in hypnotically To sensuosity in play But it seemed a bit neuroticky In a sexual kind of way The poem went on robotically And I’d just like to say That passion made chaotically Was love in disarray I’d acted idiotically And to my own dismay Went back quite melancholically To Forum 9’s display And there was penned exotically A poem that made my day Cause I felt a bit eroticky In a sensual sort of way Wilfred’s verse narcotically Just took my breath away And I then began osmotically To consume his sweet bouquet His verse is anatomically Hypnotically constructed And quite a bit exotic and Erotically seductive And so, dear Wilfred, light the fires With more sweet poems of loves desires Elizabeth Santos [This message has been edited by Elizabeth Santos (edited 09-07-2000).] |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wow Liz ... I loved the hypnotic flow to this!  Sounds like you had a wonderful little adventure ... now I must keep my eyes open for this poem of which you speak! Well done!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Wilfred, This is in jest, but truly your verses are very sensual, but reflect the desires of true love for a woman and that's what makes them so appealing. I think it's difficult to write that kind of poetry. Liz PS. I don't know where Wilhelm came from. Perhaps I was thinking of my cousin in Germany, sorry only Wilfred could have written that poem. Thanks Martie for correcting me Liz [This message has been edited by Elizabeth Santos (edited 09-07-2000).] |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Dear Liz; This is so much fun to read, and I, too, can tell you had fun writing it. The wording is so cleverly done! Love, Ellie Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. eL |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
LOL Simply delicious Lizzy... K"He looked across the silky surface of the Severn... it was a famously difficult river with fierce tides..." From Jack Maggs |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Liz--I love the way you wrote this...with such a light touch...he does write beautiful poetry, doesn't he. |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Liz - LOL - Terrific style - The poem too! You make this poor old poet envious with your deft touch. As for YOU Wilfred, my jealousy knows no bounds. It appears I must add you to my hit list, which now contains Balladeer, Toerag, Rebel, Parker, .... egads, I hate you all! lol. |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Very well done..I loved it....What fun!!!! Julie :) |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Liz - First things first - I chuckled till my sides ached - This was so (as the kids say) Kewl! I loved it - I see it as further proof of your remarkable depth of talent. "Eroticky", "Neuroticky" and "Meloncholically" are now staples in my lexicon As for you other very reasoned comments - I think from a look at my catalog in #9 vice Adult -it is obvious I'm trying to stay in the sensual -but like many - I get carried away in my fantasies at times. Btw - If you're feeling "eroticky" again any time soon, I've posted others in adult that COULD HAVE been posted in #9. Admittedly one or 2 were quite to the point  THANK YOU VERY MUCH! |
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Auguste 
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Liz, This is so well done...it made me smile. Your poetry is always such a delight to read. Michael Proust- "Love is space and time measured by the heart" |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Elizabeth you have penned a poem that is both funny and erotick...its fun when you find a poem that touches you sensual side...yes...James |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Having read the poem of which you speak...I have to agree...Bill writes to all womens hearts...and UUUMMMMMMM to various other parts of their anatomy as well hehehe (just go check adult if you dont believe me)This is a great write and so much fun to read |
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ac Member
since 1999-06-17
Posts 129Cayey, PR - USA |
Simply too clever for words Elizabeth. I loved the word play and how it flowed seemlessly till the end. A great read. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Now this seemed like it was just TOO much to write in TOO many ways.LOL Liz, you sweet thing you. You have penned a beauty that has more than just my head spinning. Lovely write. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Kit, Check out page 6 or 7 of this forum for " Kissing You Softly" For a great adventure. Thanks, dear twin Ellie, Thanks ellie, but his are a lot more fun Severn, Thanks, Sweetie, it's so nice to hear from you Martie, Yes, he does, he's brought a lot of talent to Passions My dear LngJhn, you have no reason to be jealous of any many, Take it from a woman who knows, and please get rid of that list of yours Thanks, dear friend for you comments JulieAnn, THank you so much Wilfred, You're quite welcome for the little poem, but now you made me curious about your poems over there in the Adult Forum. I'll check them out as soon as I get to feeling a little eroticky. Love your poetry! Liz Thank you, Michael, I'm glad you enjoyed it James, Thanks for reading and glad you had fun with it. Paula, Seems like you are a Yeats fan also, thanks for your comments, I enjoyed reading them ac, I appreciate your remarks, Thank you Mark, You are always so kind with your comments, this kind of poem is easy to write. I'm glad it got you spinning Thanks Liz |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
i love it!psssst.... you really went into the adult forum??? geez.... OMG... i went there once but... almost wrote something and posted it so... i left... quick! before i got in trouble... hehe seriously, though... this was GREAT! well written and fun and all that good stuff! ~ all you can really ever expect out of life is a good apology and some decent poetry ~ |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Doreen, No, I have never been to the adult forum. I just said that to embellish the poem a little, but now that I know that Wilfred's posting there, I think we should go check it out, don't you? Thanks, Doreen, glad you liked the poem Liz |
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