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juliet_2u
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0 posted 2000-09-06 07:18 PM


Evil Walks The Rooms

On any given day,
In the house in which you live,
Evil may walk the rooms,
Searching for a soul to steal.
Its presense you can sense.
Its shadow it does cast.
An angry, bitter spirit,
Lingering from days gone past.
You may not see its figure.
But you will know it's there.
For as you're busy living,
You'll feel its deathly glare.
Hideous is its grin,
With eyes as black as coal.
Lurking for the chance,
To steal your very soul.
The noises that go bump.
The footsteps in the night.
Yes you need to be afraid.
Horror dwells just out of sight.
So when you turn your lights out.
And prepare for peaceful sleep.
Say a needed prayer,
That God your soul will keep.


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Mark Bohannan
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1 posted 2000-09-06 07:23 PM


She writes of love and she writes of pain and now she writes haunting nightmares as well.....WELL done and I love the ending. So are you trying to tell me something or what?
Steve B
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2 posted 2000-09-06 07:25 PM


Juls ~ Is that what makes all those weird sounds at night? gezzz I will never sleep again...   very good write ,, SB

“The union of the mathematician with the poet,
fervor with measure, passion with correctness,
this surely is the ideal”

Sven
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3 posted 2000-09-06 07:27 PM


Wow Juls. . .have you been watching scary movies again??

Excellent. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


juliet_2u
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4 posted 2000-09-06 07:29 PM


Mark Mark, my dear friend, whatever would I be trying to tell you???...LOL...Glad you liked it.
Juls

juliet_2u
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5 posted 2000-09-06 07:34 PM


Hey Steve listen up. All those weird sounds your parents told you was just the wind. Well guess what, now ya know the truth....LOL..Thanks for stopping by.
Juls

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6 posted 2000-09-06 07:34 PM


wow I'll be forever looking over my shoulders for weeks now

What I write and others read is your own experiance and perceptions.

juliet_2u
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7 posted 2000-09-06 07:43 PM


Now Sven you know I have to watch my scary movies. And thank you as always my dear friend.
Juls




[This message has been edited by juliet_2u (edited 09-06-2000).]

juliet_2u
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8 posted 2000-09-06 07:53 PM


Maria, just try to relax...lol.
Juls

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