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Oh Autumn
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Oh Autumn |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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I hear the rhythm of leaves Autumn whispers in my ear it will not be long, I hear the robins' song Oh autumn, please serenade me Flutter your skirt of ginger hues as you prance in the breeze Cha Cha your limbs Oh Autumn, please dance for me When you are posing bare and no leaves in your hair just ginger ash perfume in smoke and mirrors of yesterday's blooms Oh autumn, intoxicate me |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Victoria your writing makes it all seems so...intoxicating....James |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
oh..this is very nice! what a beautiful dance it is! ~Dawn "Steady as it comes, right down to you, I've said it all, so maybe we're a Bliss of another kind" Bliss-Tori Amos |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you James for that very nice compliment.  |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
cha cha cha..ha ha..thank you pountprincess |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This is so different, and it's my favorite time of the year. I really enjoyed the words you choose and the uniqueness of how you phrased the poem and by the way, welcome to Passions.! Kathleen |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
one of your best Vic- and you kept the color |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank your for reading Irish Rose and Wilfred..glad you enjoyed my poem |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Victoria~ This is a charming little gem. 'Flutter your skirt of ginger hues as you prance in the breeze' 'Flutter your skirt' - how ADORABLE ! I enjoyed this so much. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you Marge. So glad you enjoyed it |
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