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Our Game |
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Beth Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468WA, Australia 
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A moments silence Without a word to say A passing glance Looking towards your way. Your hand reached out And touched my soul Your piercing eyes Making me loose control. Our lips touching In a way so sweet My heart fluttering The moment we meet. Not a care in the world Specifically today We know the rules The game we play. You act like a fool and say its fun I act stupidly Thinking I've won. But we both know It has to end If we're supposed to be together We will one day mend. |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
ah...Beth..."you act like a fool and say its fun, i act stupidly thinking ive won"...very good to see you analyzing your own behaviour. and also..as the last lines state...i do believe fate brings us together..and yes if its meant to be..your friendship will mend. Always great work my friend! |
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Beth Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468WA, Australia |
~Dawn, You of all people should know where Im coming from. Now that I understand the game I can play it better (lol). Thanks for your constant encouragement~ |
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Eddie de Jong Junior Member
since 2000-07-31
Posts 27 |
Beth, What a lovely poem, and so true. We all play games, but only once you understand what you are doing can you move forward. Keep them flowing. E |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Nice work, Beth... leaves me with a tinge of hope for better things to follow... with these lines ... "If we're supposed to be together We will one day mend" regards, sudhir |
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Beth Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468WA, Australia |
~Eddie, That is exactly right. I think everyone has been a little guilty of playing a game. Thank you dearly~ ~Sudhir, Unfortunately we havent mended but Im glad i participated (lol). Thank you so very much!~ |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Beth- This is wonderful. I had been wondering when the next one of yours was coming. You can't win without first participating and if you participate enough times you will eventually win. Keep smilin.  |
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Beth Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468WA, Australia |
~So very true Mark..but now that the tables have turned I lead...(lol). Im always smilin'. Thanks for your sweet reply~ |
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