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BloomingRose
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0 posted 2000-09-06 11:02 AM


An Annual Finale


A throng of flowers anxiously await
they line up to take their turn
giddy with smiles, they anticipate the dance

Flowing rose glides with petals held high
bloomed to her fullest, she parades with a sway
bowing as she dances, petal here, petal there

Dancing daisy swirls and twirls
barely able to keep her secrets
tossing her petals to one and all
he loves me, he loves me not
spin me again!

Pansy girl gives it a whirl
as she does the peppermint twist
her stem of green, screams with glee

Impatiens is her name
can't wait to take her turn
she bounces with glee...
pick me! pick me!

And so the finale begins
as annually they spin
a glory of colors, begins and ends


BloomingRose




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SEA
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1 posted 2000-09-06 12:36 PM


BR~ this is beautiful, and I saw the flowers swirling and dancing as I read! Love it!   -SEA

Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB


X Angel
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2 posted 2000-09-06 01:26 PM


very sweet  
BloomingRose
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3 posted 2000-09-06 02:49 PM


Thanks SEA, I can do a dance myself right about now.  


XAngel, Thanks  

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