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wednesday morning snake bite kit
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wednesday morning snake bite kit |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209
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i apologize in advance for the content...it needs posting more than it needs comments.....thanks wednesday morning snake bite kit if i had only known or cared how easily you were going to ruffle today i would have readily stayed out of your path instead of now dodging your sh....rapnel from below your lofty perch lost to you is my kindness and my soft caring your possessive control has stolen it from us both and look at me now snarling at your sarcastic curling lips and i would hit you this time but my hand wouldn’t sacrilege the name of love the venom creeps and crawls itching its way into my already overstretched nerves i puncture the pain with my pen word release to the poison close my eyes and look skyward to avoid the steady drip drip |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
POWERFUL.... YEAH purge it all... let the anger drip... and may the poison release its grip... Corazon, this is after a while that I see you here... so good to read your work... regards, sudhir |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
ohh this was biting I am just learning to get angry "constructive anger" is an empowering emotion ~Heather |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
and just how long have I been telling you!? watch out for those snakes... they bite.. HuggsZzzzz -- for anti-venom  |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
You have so many sides, Corazon.....this is a very powerful one.. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Oh, geesh!!! And I would have sworn I didn't sent that email to you... I really meant to hit delete!!! Honessssssssstt! *G* Once again, you've taken an ugly situation and created a powerful poem... well done! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I understand how the writing helps...James |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Corazon - Thisis truly my lucky day... because I didn't make you a member of the bowling team! lol - This is a very skillfully written free verse - I can feel your contempt and anger seething through, lunging at the bindings. I hope you resolve your situation. As Rebel said... Huggggzzzzzz - for the snake bite antivenom |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
OUCH! oh how i know that venom...it stings... ms. corazon... your pen name says it all... straight from the heart of a true Poet .. as always, reading you hits close |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
well guys was gonna let this bit of poison die a quiet death, but just had to say thanks and send hugs back  its not so bad to come back and read now that the poison is not so fresh |
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