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The Morrow's Call
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The Morrow's Call |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA 
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The Morrow's Call As I lay 'neath the night's lavender glow tonight, you fill the mind. Attuned, clouds drifting, shadowing the moon, as stars peek modestly from behind. Restrained, memories replay the day intently felt I, your gaze. Trembling, at thoughts of caressing, each touch joining the night, in it's haze. Will these moments be fleeting of muse, wondering... What shall the morrow bring? As it silently enters it's tender display of eternities song to sing. Throughout the heavens the skies cross-streak while in front of the moon, mists the dark. As the coolness weighs down and blankets the night, mind travels the strain of a lark. Oft skyward in flight, my heart fluttering, in beauty, the night's reward. As the sun rises east meeting lavender haze, once again, the golden's restored. A promising start to a new renaissance, lending it's warmth over all. Ever extending it's arms reaching wide answering needs of each morning's call. ©M/M *2k [This message has been edited by MMoonchild (edited 09-05-2000).] |
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Steve B Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 140Southern PA |
Maureen, this is so very beautiful and exudes your warmth throughout....  Steve B“The union of the mathematician with the poet, fervor with measure, passion with correctness, this surely is the ideal” |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Maurine - Very well written - just the right amount of simile to keep it from getting lost while retaining an ethereal quality. Yes. Very well written sums it up. |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Very nicely written. I like muchly. |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Ms Emily Bronte (wuthering heights) would be squriming in envy as this piece, hauntingly beautiful Maureen. wonderful poem. "Think I'm - I'm lost among the undergrowth So much so I woke up I love you all the same" Manic street preachers You stole the sun from my heart. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Maureen, another beautiful poem. Reflecting your soul as clearly as a mirror. What can I say but magnificent |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
thank you Steve B for your gracious words and for your constant visits of support ~~soft smiles M |
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