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Symbiosis...#1
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Symbiosis...#1 |
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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA 
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True friendship knows its own intrinsic bound The pinnacle a covenant unfound Perchance cerebral spirits meet Fulfilling thoughts and dreams in kind To render yearning minds replete Thence wending on with arms in bind Mere touch supplanting idle prate No greater trust than hands entwined. Enamored passions proffer sate As ardent raptured hearts unite In sumptuous repast of fate With surety of love in sight Two souls shall only then enjoin In confluence of shared delight That perfect niche, a bond without excess Yields ever symbiotic synthesis.  |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
so....is this a true story?  ~H PS yanno I love this |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Nan, this is truly wonderful! What an exquisite flow of words ... such an incredible command of form and language. Beautifully penned!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
XAngel... I'd surely like to think so... It's certainly ME - that's for sure..  Kit - Thanks muchly - This is one of my personal favorites... |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Wonderful Work Amazing Art Poetic Perfection regards, sudhir |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Nan, how did you know, I needed this today? Thank you! [And Nan strives on, making the momentous mountain of magical metaphor yet one more goal to conquer.] |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Well, nan - yer at it again! Another complex, perfect poem with so much content I have a difficult time keeping it in simple terms. Beautiful - just like you. |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
Nan ... the work of a truly practiced and polished plume ... refreshing to read ... thanks. |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Nan, That perfect niche, a bond without excess Yields ever symbiotic synthesis. I have never heard True friendship described so eloquently, excellently written piece. "Think I'm - I'm lost among the undergrowth So much so I woke up I love you all the same" Manic street preachers You stole the sun from my heart. |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
huh? hehe... just kidding... i was convoluted... er confluenced.... ummm.... and synthesized when reading this... of course, i had to look all those words up first to figure out what i was... *G but all kidding aside... this is a fine piece of work here, Ms. Nan... i've always enjoyed this one! Glad you reposted it! ~ all you can really ever expect out of life is a good apology and some decent poetry ~ |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
resistance is futile..  reminds me of one I wrote called Morphing... perhaps I should repost it here in open... fabulous Nan... |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Wow - Step out of the room for a minute, and they all come to visit... Sudhir - Thanks - It's not nearly as much fun as devouring those rats, though... Karilea - Mucho Danke - Maybe we're psychic - all that sunshine, ya know? Mike - I was counting on you to understand the complecks ones.... geesh.. MA - Thanks - I gave it a spit shine just for this piece.. Brian - Merci - Humble bow.. Doreen - That was the word I needed - convoluted - Got my "con's" all twisted there - or was that the "volutes"... Yeah that's it... Reb - Futility quells resistance... Rock on!!... Oh - and thanks.. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Nan~ I had read this little gem on your web site and enjoyed it so much. Thanks for sharing ... and LOVE the graphic also. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Gee, all the way back to #1? Time is really flying, isn't it, Nan? "course you just keep getting better... |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
You've described it waaaaaayyy better than I ever could...hehehe.....one of my favorites, Nan! Denise |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Marge - Mike - Denise.... I'm so glad you enjoyed this one - It's a "gem" that epitomizes me... Thanks sooooo muchly... |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Absolutely beautiful!!!! |
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