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Michael G
Senior Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 579
Nashville

0 posted 2000-08-02 11:40 AM


She has sat and wonderd
through the darkned hours
of this life she has
the one she lives
of nights alone with kids
of a father far away
of her heart torn by coices
and of me her soulmate.
How we met in hours delight
and passions glance was formed
the movment of hearts as one
that time under candle flame,
how she questions her choice
and wonders what may be
I will never leave her heart
as that would not be me.
And time will come
as it always must
she will move to him
and his starshine love,
she will know in her heart
that true love is boundless
and that when you can, you open
your soul and being to love once more.

© Copyright 2000 Michael G - All Rights Reserved
Rosebud1229
Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813
North Carolina
1 posted 2000-08-02 12:39 PM


Micheal this was so beautiful, you are very talented with your words I could feel your words reach out with such emotions. Thank you for sharing.
Angel Sighs And Smiles
Junior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 16

2 posted 2000-08-02 01:14 PM


A most beautiful poem! It spoke to my very soul!  A real privilege to read!
Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

3 posted 2000-08-03 03:09 AM


Michael...
there is no greater act of love than that of unselfish love...
to let someone go because you believe it is for the best...
shows such character and soul..
touching work here my sweet-poet-pal
your poetic heart shines in each line.
take care
jm

Jenn E
Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589
Kelowna, BC, Canada
4 posted 2000-08-04 01:03 AM


Torn by choices, yes this I feel. Feeling ripped, cut open, divided into two......My soulmate will forever remain, and I will go on loving him all the same. I have asked destiny a question through all this greyness that surrounds, I am waiting for an answer, and one day it will be found.

As Always
Jenn E

Marina
Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245
Pickering, Ontario
5 posted 2000-08-04 01:46 AM


To love one who is bound to another, is the hardest thing my friend.  But it sounds like you made the right choice.  If it is meant to be, she will return.  Your pen of truth and memories script this well.

Marina


It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen
Marina Crossley



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