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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2000-09-05 06:41 PM

My Heart's Desire

Opened my eyes
in Love to see
it was you my Love
softly kissing me.

Closed my eyes
unsure of your Love for me.
Please fall in Love
and bring life into my fantasy.

Each time we meet
I place a kiss upon your cheek.
A gentle kiss to let you know
my heart's desire
for Love to grow.

I live to Love
I love to kiss
when you're not near my Love
your kiss I miss.

Jameslee@September05,2000
ToMinamyLove.

[This message has been edited by jmlee12345 (edited 09-07-2000).]

Kit McCallum

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since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

1 posted 2000-09-05 06:49 PM

Ahhh James ... the sweet lady love you speak of, is a lucky lady indeed, to receive such beautiful and tender words from your heart. Very nicely penned!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Butterflies_dont_cry
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since 2000-03-06

Posts 3733
Michigan

2 posted 2000-09-05 06:50 PM

The kiss says it all James...very tender write~

insect
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since 2000-04-22

Posts 1014

3 posted 2000-09-05 07:41 PM

Very nice!
Love is beautiful!

Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2000-09-05 07:47 PM

James,

Wow, so sweet and tender. She is very lucky indeed to have found such love as you offer. I wish you both the best my friend. Great writing.

LW

Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2000-09-06 06:41 AM

Thanks Kit, Butterfly, insect, and Lone Wolf...I appreciate your kind words...
I will give my Love if she desires it...James

Beth
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since 2000-07-06

Posts 468
WA, Australia

6 posted 2000-09-06 07:37 AM

~This was very sweet and tender...A lucky woman indeed..!~

~Cherie~

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2000-09-07 03:58 PM

Thank you Beth...hoping that love will come my way...James

Meadowmuse
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since 1999-12-27

Posts 3263

8 posted 2000-09-07 04:07 PM

"Opened my eyes
in Love to see
it was you my Love
softly kissing me."

James, what a lovely, poetic idea you've expressed here. Have I told you how much I admire your ability to write what you feel? The tenderness you display in your writing is how love communicates.

~ Claire

Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau

Marsha

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since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

9 posted 2000-09-07 04:31 PM

Beauty indeed James, so tender and soft, like an angels kiss. very Lucky to have you I hope she knows.

Mark Bohannan
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since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

10 posted 2000-09-07 04:51 PM

Very tender and full of sweet sensuality. Great one James.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

11 posted 2000-09-08 06:23 AM

Thank you Claire, Marsha, and Mark for the lovely comments.
Claire your warm comments make me feel so appreciated...James

Marina
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since 2000-02-10

Posts 2245
Pickering, Ontario

12 posted 2000-09-08 11:04 AM

This poem made me smile James. It is so soft, sweet and sincere. A lovely poem indeeed.

Marina

It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen
Marina Crossley

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

13 posted 2000-09-20 04:15 PM

Thank you Marina for your soft words...James

Dee
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since 2000-08-19

Posts 2330
Queensland, Australia

14 posted 2000-09-20 04:35 PM

All I can add is, I hope she's read this. It's beautiful.
Dee

CocoBaci
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since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

15 posted 2000-09-20 04:45 PM

Without much more to add I will say this your writing is pure romantic bliss...

Enjoyed the read James

Coco

CAMERON UNDERWOOD
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since 2000-08-31

Posts 26

16 posted 2000-09-20 05:21 PM

You couldn't of said it better.
Love is an amazing animal. It soon begins to live and breath on its own.
Truley a very lucky lady.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

17 posted 2000-09-22 05:11 PM

Thank you Dee and Coco and Cameron.
Dee yes she has read this...she has responded in a very nice fashion...James

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

18 posted 2000-09-23 04:23 PM

Excellent James. . . I can see that your heart is full these days. . .

Just wonderful. . .

--------------------------------------------------------

That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

juliet_2u
Senior Member

since 2000-07-23

Posts 1125
North Carolina

19 posted 2000-09-23 05:03 PM

Oh James this is so sweet and tender. She's one lucky lady. I feel like bursting into the song Love Is In The Air....lol

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