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vandana
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0 posted 2000-09-05 11:41 AM



The way you make me smile,
Everytime ,
I looked Into your eyes,
There's something I show,
Yes,It's shows Intoyour eyes,
I love the way
You make me smile,
I love the way
You make me smile,
I love the you
Take my heart away,
I love the way,
You do the things
you do for me,
I love the way,
you make me smile,
The way you take my heart away,
When the night comes along,
You come to me,
Just to make me smile ,
When I cry at night,
And needed someone to hold me,
You always come around and
Make me smile,
I love the way
you do,
I love the way
you make me smile,
Yes,
I love the way
you make me smile,
The way you make me smile,

© Copyright 2000 vandana - All Rights Reserved
Sudhir Iyer
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1 posted 2000-09-05 11:55 AM


Another beautifully tender piece this one, vandana...

regards,
sudhir

Paula Finn
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missouri
2 posted 2000-09-05 11:58 AM


Smiling here
Sunnyone
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3 posted 2000-09-05 01:06 PM



Oh, vandana....I wasn't smiling before, but you put it back there!!!  Thank you, my friend!!!!
               !!!!
< !signature-->

Today is a gift....
That is why they call it
    'the Present'!






[This message has been edited by Sunny1 (edited 09-05-2000).]

Mike
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4 posted 2000-09-05 03:41 PM


Very, very nice Vandana...  I liked a lot.
JamesMichael
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5 posted 2000-09-05 03:43 PM


Vandana I am envious of you...you are so lucky to have found someone to make you smile...happiness is a sweet blessing in this life...James
Sven
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6 posted 2000-09-05 07:16 PM


Excellent vandana, I like this side of you much better!!!      

Wonderful!!

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Lone Wolf
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7 posted 2000-09-05 08:02 PM


vandana,

What a way to be loved . . . sigh.  Hang onto it my friend.  You are very lucky indeed.  Nice writing.  

Lone Wolf


Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

Marge Tindal
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8 posted 2000-09-05 10:51 PM


VanDana~
Hello, my friend.
Smiling   at your smiles  
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com



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