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Open Poetry #9

Patient Haiku

Sunshine

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0 posted 2000-09-05 11:30 AM

Patience, come to thee
Let thy poetic wit sit
That what writ, be right

Karilea
When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ

Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26

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Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

1 posted 2000-09-05 11:38 AM

~Karilea~

Wonderful words flow
From the pen you wield so well
This is Poetry!

regards
sudhir

Sunshine

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2 posted 2000-09-05 02:09 PM

Thank you Sudhir...it's fun!

Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06

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Staffordshire, England

3 posted 2000-09-05 02:11 PM

Let their be Sunshine..
Dancing in the sky above..
Words of truth and love..

I always enjoy your every word!!

< !signature-->

Today is a gift....
That is why they call it
'the Present'!

[This message has been edited by Sunny1 (edited 09-05-2000).]

Sunshine

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4 posted 2000-09-05 04:39 PM

Sunny1, I have to laugh...I wrote this as a remindful joke to me to let my stuff sit so I can go back and find errors in my spelling/grammer BEFORE I post...LOL at you, as you still have time to edit, if indeed "their" should be "there". [Or you could have meant "theirs" and I could get hugs from everyone!]

Hugs, my friend!!!!

Kit McCallum

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Ontario, Canada

5 posted 2000-09-05 06:05 PM

Powerful words penned
From a celestial light
Who shines so brightly

Great work Sunshine!

Best wishes,
/Kit

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