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Heaven's Steam
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Heaven's SteamAnd it was in the fewest hours of sleep that I dreamt a night's worth of dream, draped between wake and not And you were Heaven's steam, beading, hot, dripping, now slippery, streaming down the slick side of musing's morning scene. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Meadowmuse.... Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh........this is really wonderful in all aspects!!! You do have such a beautiful style....... Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A dreamy situation...can only imagine the possibilities...James |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Claire~ Such lovely musing in this dream state. You've crafted it well. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Hmmmm...steamy dreams for your muse. Well penned with this one. The possibilities are endless. Loved it much. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
This just slithers right down the page. Masterfully done and beautiful Liz |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Hi Claire, This is very pretty, dear friend. I haven't had a dream like this one in ages. Take care, Michael Proust- "Love is space and time measured by the heart" |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh... that pretty well sums it up... |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Lovely!! it reminds me somehow of Emily Dickinson... I like this part especially: 'that I dreamt a night's worth of dream, draped between wake and not'  K"He looked across the silky surface of the Severn... it was a famously difficult river with fierce tides..." From Jack Maggs |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Sunny, thank you. I appreciate you taking time to read and share your enthusiasm with me...glad you liked this. James, yes, the possibilities are virtually endless. Thanks for your "dreamy" response. Miss Marge, I thank you. Aren't dreams often just so lovely? Mark, thank you! Steamy dreams, indeed... Liz, many thanks to you tonight. I still can't get your "A Far Off Place" out of my mind since reading it earlier this evening. Michael, thank you, dear. By the way, did you remember the peanut butter? Mike, I love how you've summed it up... Severn, thank you, and for the Dickinson reference, as well. She has long been one of my favorites. ~ Claire < !signature--> Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau [This message has been edited by Meadowmuse (edited 09-04-2000).] |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
I'm seeing a side of Claire I've not seen - and I like it very much ~S~ - btw- I'm with Severn (saves me a copy & paste |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Wow! I just love your way with words! Very lovely! Denise |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Bill, we all have many sides, yes? Thank you for letting me know you enjoyed"this" one of me. Denise, thank you so much for your sincerity (and your "wow") my friend. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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