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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
We share so many things in life Each day we are amused By ‘knowing’ what each other thinks Whether certain or confused Life has dealt a wicked hand To potential lovers you and I For we can never be as one No matter how hard we try No one can touch my heart As you have this past year No one made me think or laugh As you have done, my dear Like pieces of a jigsaw puzzle We’re a tongue and groove fit But you are from that new box there And I from the old one opposite |
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Steve B Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 140Southern PA |
Sharon ~ sadly sounds all to familiar ... life is definitely a puzzle, even when the pieces are meant to fit, they don't always...  sighhhhing Steve B |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This is sweet and touching...and I too, like the imagery of puzzle pieces...loved this Mizz P---and omigod she's gonna wanna kill me for that!!! Grins and hugs, sharon. Thanks. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Hi PdV.. "We can never be as one no matter how hard we try" > "You are from the new box there and I from the old and opposite...this just jumped out thru screen! I truly enjoy your style and expression you pen. Coco |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Happy and sad lady! But no matter what, you know I'll always love you!  Of course you know that! |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Thank you all for you kind words. Chris, you are a puzzle - but you know that! |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
What a great great piece of work this one... regards O Poet deVine, Sudhir |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Hmm... puzzling... But I know you'll figure it out - You're good at finding solutions... good at writing about them too..  |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
sometimes, there are pieces that you never think will fit. . . or there are pieces that never seem to make it out of the box. . . until you realize that the puzzle is missing something, and finally. . . in a corner of the box, you find that last piece. . . and it's been there all this time. . . just waiting to be discovered. . . but you never noticed it. . . until now. . . Sorry. . . just thinking out loud about life and puzzles. . . great poem as always deVine. . . glad to see it coming back. . . ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
deVine, Wonderful poem! I loved the puzzle analogy. The pieces fit so perfectly yet pieces appeared older and those from the new box, newer, upon looking at the completed scene. Really enjoyed this one. Great writing. Marcy |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
MissdeVine I'm not sure if you are referring to age or to uncompatability...but I understand how complex it is to find two that fit together like a puzzle...James |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Chris now whatcha doin comin from that new box? Didn't I tell ya to stay with the old one?  Sharon I love how this is pictured! New and Old, Old and New, and sometimes HEY, ya just get lucky and they do fit together  <*\\\>< Be an organ donor...give your heart to Jesus! |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Sometimes with a hammer sometimes with a knife we make those pieces over in order to fit our life!! Well done Ms. Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Good morning Poet deVine, A picture puzzle you have written in my mind, and one that I thoroughly enjoyed. I'm glad that I dropped in this morning, to read this writing of yours. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Good morning Poet deVine, A picture puzzle you have written in my mind, and one that I thoroughly enjoyed. I'm glad that I dropped in this morning, to read this writing of yours. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
One day, you will find the one that fits just right. He is out there somewhere. Good luck! LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Awww....this is very sad, Sharon  Very creative writing too! Denise |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Painfully familliar... Loved the creativity, good job! Take care. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Y'know...I wanted to add one more thing...I too, love puzzles, and I've always found that the easiest way to solve one was to start by noticing the similarities first...you know, sharon, end pieces first, then colors and patterns...smiles and prayers for you, you are a lovely lady and I hope that the pieces all fall together for you. |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
puzzles..well they confuse me...and take entirely too long....if it looks like work, feels like work and sounds like work...well you know...but i can relate to the opposite of this and I LOVE the way you put it!! great post!!! Julie :) |
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