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On Light Of Day
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On Light Of Day |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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On Light Of Day ~*Marge Tindal*~ On light of day in soft array you come to lay across the very thread of me Gently showing with the knowing simply flowing over me Ever breaking light of making giving - taking warmth of thee Gently quaking new thoughts making softly waking the soul of me ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Jenova Junior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 16germany |
Wow, what a flow! =) You're definitely gifted... judging from what I've read of you so far... well, that ain't much *feels ashamed*, but I just joined... so I'm looking forward to read more of your things... beautiful. Ah, there was just one thing: I always stumble over the 4th and 5th lines... they seem so out of rhythm, what do you want to express with this? Do you? *wonders* Love Jenova |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Smooth as silk it flows... Marge.. regards, sudhir |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Beautifully done, Marge! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Jenova~ Oxymoronically you stated - quote: I said - quote: 'Scuse me ? ? I write 'em ... you read 'em !  Interpretation is left entirely up to your good taste and judgement. Let it take you where it will. Welcome to Passions.  Sudhir~ Thanks for recognizing the silken threads !  Martie~ Thank you, my sweet friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
This flowed beautifully......I loved it...I haven't been around to reply lately...Been busy job hunting.....but i will be around from now on...wonderful peice here..... Julie :) |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Marge, You have such a talent! I always like reading your poems and this one was no different Loved the flow.rosepetals25 |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Wow, Marge! There I go again, just saying "WOW!" This is one of your best, a masterpiece, hon! Corinne |
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BSC
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Ahhh so lovely Marge, nothing better than that soft morning light. Bonnie |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Marge, our tender weaver, this is so sweet. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
On light of day in soft array you come to lay across the very thread of me Gently showing with the knowing simply flowing over me =================== simply exquisite words... "across the very thread of me" what an amazing line that is..truly beautiful poem Margie-gator your talent shines in it along with the morning sun jm There are places inside our souls - that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts - that need to be loved this much. ~jm~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JulieAnn~ Have missed you ... glad you dropped by. Good luck with the hunt. Thank you, hon. RosePetals~ Thank you for the very sweet reply. Corinne~ You are just the 'WOW'ingest lady I know. Thanks gal. Bonnie~ Bless you - you are a sweetie. Claire~ Ahhhhhh ! Doesn't surprise me that you picked up the threads ! You're a doll. JanetMarie~ If *HUGS* have wings ... Open the window - mine's flying in ! *Love to you. You indeed know me sooooooo well ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Marge~ Lovely my friend. Soft and sweet. Just like you!! LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful, as always, Marge! Denise |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Laying rose petals at your feet here... Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LoneWolf~ Oh ... you know I appreciate you. Denise~ Thank you. I popped into the Corner Pub and caught your post. Karilea~ That's what that lovely fragrance is ! I thank you, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Yet another beautiful piece from you, Marge. Thank you for sharing it with us. "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde "The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LoveBug~ So pleased you enjoyed it, sweetie. Take care, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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