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Hopelessly Hopeful
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Hopelessly Hopeful |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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Tedious longing without cease. Awake each night, she begs for peace. Elusive love will come to be, no other option can she see. Destined path too late to alter. On her road she will not falter. Obstacles fill the space between, she fears it could be all a dream. Yet dreams will sometimes become real. That reverie is all she feels. The wishing star still shines at night her burst of hope, her ray of light. Perhaps her wish will make it so and put an end to tales of woe... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Cat, see my hand held out to yours... |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh, this was lovely CatalinaMoon! If we wish hard enough for dreams to become reality ... they often will! Beautifully and fluidly expressed!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
Sometimes Dreams do come true..I know..It happened to me. ..I liked this..Keep writing |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Catalina, I am short on words after reading your poem, yet I just wish to let you know that your poem grasped this reader... Coco |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Catalina~ Destiny ... getting where we WANT to be ! I see the ray of hope you spread for yourself ! That's a GOOD thing ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Cat, Perhaps her wish will make it so is a wonderful, wonderful line as is all the poem. Thanks for sharing those thoughts. I was touched. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
As usual, a great creation, I just love the style, the flow, the rhymes... Hope is what keeps us going indeed. Take Care! |
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Trew Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Ottawa, Canada |
Take your wish and give it life! Keep that star shining. Beautiful poetry, Cat. |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Cat, keep dreaming and if it is meant to happen then it will, of course you may have to give the dream a little push. Wonderfully written poem and I hope it does come true. Sit down and bargain "Until your tongues are dry If the havoc and the shame continue We'll drown you in our putrefaction" Primo Levi |
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American Princess Junior Member
since 2000-08-21
Posts 49USA |
Cat, I loved this. Never give up on your dreams, I say. The only way we really ever finally lose is when we stop trying, stop dreaming... American Princess It's only me, thinking out loud... |
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