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Goodbye |
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sosweet82 Junior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 17Phoenix, AZ |
I can't do this any longer All I can do now is make myself stronger Your memory will forever last My love for you will never pass You no longer need me this I know So now I must let you go I will move on and try to get over you It will be one of the hardest thing I will ever do I tried to hold on to a love that could never be So now I'm going to do whats best for me As I turn and say good-bye I will do everything I can not to cry I know now that you and I must end But I don't know when my broken heart will mend I hope that life is kind and your dreams come true Just remember that I hold a place in my heart for you. [This message has been edited by sosweet82 (edited 08-02-2000).] |
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sosweet82 Junior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 17Phoenix, AZ |
I wrote this about a guy that I love, he is my world. This is one of the very first poems that I have ever wrote. So please tell me what you think! I hope you like it. Samantha Saban |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
your heart will heal..and your memory will always embrace the love you have for him..but will allow you to move on. This is a great first post...and im looking foward to reading more from you! Welcome to passions!  |
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topnotch707 Junior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 16vallejo, cali, usa |
That is a very touching poem. Being that i've been through alot with the man that I love it feels good to see others express there feelings about the same situation im in |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Wow tis was pretty good...your first poem huh?? Well keep it up you are very good....  Julie :) |
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T McCoy Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 186 |
this was a great entrance to passions! Welcome...i'm looking forward to more! Tony  - time grabs you by the wrist directs you where to go so make the best of this test and don't ask why it's not a question but a lesson learned in time |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
sosweet, I like it Welcome to Passions rosepetals25 |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to Passions! Please check your email for a special welcome.  |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
I enjoyed very much, it made my heart ache as saying good bye can be so painful yet......regardless if it is the right thing to do. very good. Jenn |
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lburn158 New Member
since 2000-07-09
Posts 5 |
awwwww, that makes me want to cry! |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Sosweet, This is a awesome first post and the content from the heart would be concidered sad but to me this is the start of the healing process and you wrote it down wonderfully. Welcome to passions. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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