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Open Poetry #9

Passion’s Light

spiked
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 873
Hammond, La USA

0 posted 2000-08-31 11:44 PM

Passion’s Light

Of passions light does sorrow bring
Ohh darkened night guide me to see
That life goes far beyond this day
I’ll just move on and find my way
Compassion for this broken heart
Would ease my pain help me re-start
This maze I seem to follow through
That twist and turn of life with you
On bended knee with trembling hand
Release the pain of this gentle man
And learn to set me free.

Jenn E
Senior Member

since 2000-08-02

Posts 589
Kelowna, BC, Canada

1 posted 2000-09-01 12:09 PM

So much emotion.....this ache in your heart is well portrayed.
"That life goes far beyond this day"....today is a day that I can relate to you.....I hope your pain is realeased my friend.

Jenn E

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

2 posted 2000-09-01 03:51 AM

Loved the meter and theme of this...loved, even the pained message....a beauty of a thing...well done....love how the last line, makes its impact through difference---like you, rich, smiles...like you.

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

3 posted 2000-09-01 06:42 AM

Hey Spiked,

I really liked your poem, a very emotional piece and it flowed beautifully!

Excellent!

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2000-09-01 06:49 AM

Spiked~
What gentle contemplative thoughts to turn on the sunrise.
May the light of day bring a path into view.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

spiked
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 873
Hammond, La USA

5 posted 2000-09-01 10:28 PM

Thank you Jenn E, Serenity, Dark Angel and Marge. Always nice to have so many wonderful people on your side.
Rich

[This message has been edited by spiked (edited 09-01-2000).]

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