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In Unison
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In Unison |
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nona Member
since 2000-03-03
Posts 139Fla |
In Unison A long time ago in a far away place our steps fell in line in unison pace. We tramped along in comfortable measure being together was such sweet pleasure. We shared our hopes, our dreams, our woes. When did we start to step on each others toes? And now we've parted, out searching another, who's steps match our own measure But we both know we have memories to forever treasure. Of the times gone bye when we marched in comfortable measure. ..................................nona |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Oh what a wonderful poem! I loved it so much! Why would people who match perfectly and know it would want to go looking for someone else? |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
nona - I like the metaphor you used, and the way you developed it. |
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nona Member
since 2000-03-03
Posts 139Fla |
always good to see what others make of what you pin. LM perhaps they just "out grew" each other?? thanks to both of you for taking the time to comment. |
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