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Alwye

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In the space between moments

0 posted 2000-08-02 12:40 PM

A sojourn to a sylvan stretch
I take in breath of dreams
Where nimble winds fall through the threads
Of reality’s silver seams.

Vapor blows in lacy veils
Through the still of clearing thought
And wafting through the monarch’s lair
I reach for wings ne’er caught.

The path of softness I retread
Among blooms of quiet peach
Watching as rich swells of earth
Tumble to a crystal beach.

Hawthorn grows among the wood
Tranquil petals chanting
As darkness painted ‘pon my eyes
Slowly begins recanting.

Reincarnated by the gentle lull
Of gently slumbering green
The twilight vivid within my soul
Is for the moment...unseen.

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*Krista Knutson*

"You never lose by loving. You always lose by holding back."
-Barbara DeAngelis

[This message has been edited by Alwye (edited 08-02-2000).]

wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22

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1 posted 2000-08-02 12:41 PM

oh blag blag krista you are just blessed you are

Dusk Treader

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2 posted 2000-08-02 12:59 PM

Beautiful poem, Krista! I loved your use of imagery in this one, especially this line:
"As darkness painted ‘pon my eyes"
That is just a great one! And I love the word sylvan... Wonderful poem, sweetheart!

Abrahm Simons

"Keep on dreamin' boy 'cause when you stop dreaming it's time to die" - Blind Melon

MMoonchild
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3 posted 2000-08-02 01:06 AM

Reincarnated by the gentle lull
Of gently slumbering green
The twilight vivid within my soul
Is for the moment...unseen.

love this ..you did a beautiful write...
~~softsmiles
Maureen

Dark Angel
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4 posted 2000-08-02 04:22 AM

There is so much beauty in your words Krista, I especially loved this.....

Reincarnated by the gentle lull
Of gently slumbering green
The twilight vivid within my soul
Is for the moment...unseen.

Beautiful

tracie66
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since 2000-01-18

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5 posted 2000-08-02 04:51 AM

Beauty has engulfed this my sweet friend

Lovely piece
Tracie~

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe

Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26

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6 posted 2000-08-02 06:31 AM

Sheer beautiful poetry, Krista....

lovely imagery you use to a classic effect...

regards,
sudhir

Marge Tindal

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7 posted 2000-08-02 06:37 AM

Krista~
You are just such a gifted writer.
I am fascinated by this piece.
Enchanted it is.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Poet deVine

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8 posted 2000-08-02 08:34 PM

Envy is a terrible thing...and I so envy you your talent...SUBMIT my dear Krista! This is perfect.

Sunshine

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9 posted 2000-08-02 08:38 PM

Thanks, little K, for this breath of fresh air...

Karilea
When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ

Alwye

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In the space between moments

10 posted 2000-08-02 10:37 PM

I thank you all so much.

*Krista Knutson*

"You never lose by loving. You always lose by holding back."
-Barbara DeAngelis

Silkdragon
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11 posted 2000-08-03 11:19 PM

lovely, krista... the mood set by your words is perfect. very peaceful and serene. great job!

erin

Janet Marie
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12 posted 2000-08-03 11:34 PM

OH dear...
shes wafting and 'pon'in again

my muse wont ever come back if i keep having poet envy LOL
oh well...i wouldnt want to miss this
enchanting lil jewel either way...
wonderful K,
so pretty...very cool vocab choices in this too
later-waft-on-gator
jm

There are places inside our souls -
that have never been touched.
There are places inside our hearts -
that need to be loved this much.
~jm~

Meadowmuse
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13 posted 2000-08-04 10:52 AM

"Where nimble winds fall through the threads
Of reality’s silver seams"

Krista, your gift for depicting intellect, mood and image through words is striking. What a future you have before you, dear. Loved this poem.

~ Claire

Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau

Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song

14 posted 2000-08-04 10:56 AM

Vapor blows in lacy veils
Through the still of clearing thought
And wafting through the monarch’s lair
I reach for wings ne’er caught.

Reincarnated by the gentle lull
Of gently slumbering green
The twilight vivid within my soul
Is for the moment...unseen.

Your words create such lovely images and the flow was so perfectly done. I was wanting more so I re-read every line....and then once more. Beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!

passing shadows
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15 posted 2004-05-02 07:54 PM

this is stunning!

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